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Great start for a story. Please continue, I would like to see where this is going. Also what is narutos pairing in this story?

Cool start dude
Can you do naruto x Thalia

great chapter keep it up

Nice

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

This is a lot better then boneboys fanfic in this you actual gave naruto the credit that he deserves

Awesome first chapter i really enjoyed it i liked how you did naruto introduction to the story and his interactions with the other characters can't wait for the next chapter

I think it has a really great premise and I would like to see more. The only problem I have is the grammar like it’s not bad but can be easily fixed.

For example you have two people speak on the same line when you should go down to the next one and start a fresh sentence. Like it would be Naruto said this then drop down a line and Percy would say his thing. You don’t do it a lot but it does happen enough to the point it gets a bit distracting but as I said easily fixable.

So yeah I guess that’s it from me for now. I look forward till the next one, hopefully you’ll have all that stuffed fix before then.

Cheers man.

Nice chapter

You took cosmos from saint seiya

Great start to this story keep it up. It's about time we got some saint seiya involved in this type of crossover I feel it was brilliantly implemented. As for adding the Cloths of the Saints I feel they should be added in for a couple of reasons.

1. Since you've watched the show you should know that the Cloths were also to protect the saints from their own Cosmos burning them up

2. I feel it would be really cool if Percy actually gained the Bronze cloth of Pegasus or the Silver Cloth of Perseus

Sweet story cant wait to see where it goes from here. I wonder if naruto has a cloth(armor) probably something related to the nine tails?

Will we see other Pantheons like super OP Hindus or Noble Phantasms?

Cosmos... Cosmos and chaos...really hope this has some Final Fantasy in this especially with having some of the characters from each series added in this story as a group that naruto leads and their main arch nemesis being partnered up with kronos hell this would even look more like dissidia with tge champions of cosmos fighting against the champions of chaos