Very nice, and I would have loved the "I told you so" part. However, very cool and as a non-English speaker, I never heard Welsh but I was so intrigued that I went on youtube in order to hear how it sounds eheh. I also liked very much the idea of the sassy child Remus even though it's so very sad.

Hi, I love all your fics, especially the Remadora ones, and especially this one because it's so soft. But I also wanted to let you know that you left in what I think was note to yourself while you were writing. It's right before Tonks find Remus, when she's thinking about how good a father he is, and you left in parentheses about needing to find a better simile. Pretty simple mistake, but I figured you'd want someone to tell you so you could fix it. It's an absolutely lovely fic otherwise!