I’ll admit I’ve never read Shaman King. But that was fun. I liked the idea of the story and how you wrote it. I might even read the mange after this

Thanks for the story. It would be interesting to see what the epilogue could possibly be like.

I'm always happy to see your stories even if I'm not familiar with the source material. Looking forward to more of your work.

OH MY GOD. OY MY GOD.
This is SO good? My heart fecking exploded when Hao said “I can’t hear anything” oh my gosh this is wonderful. Thank you so much Tsume for another amazing story!

Beautiful story! Yoh is such a good little brother, and Hao turned out really well with a lovely mother and little brother who adores him. Hao seems to have found true happiness. He still got his ideas, but he’s not “destroy all”, he knows there’s good in the world.

I think he gained moderation and an ability to see the whole picture and not think in extremes, like “they’re all evil, there’s no good in the world. They must be destroyed”.
Keiko’s guidance helped him A LOT.

THanks for writing this.

Wow... this is a pretty cool way to end it. For people new to it, it's one of those contemplative endings. For those who know it, it's bittersweet and heartwarming. I've loved this one :)

Its rare to see such a well-written shaman king fanfict. I loved the plot and the way you showed them. Thank you .

Love it!

Short but sweet, I was hoping for a little more but too bad it was great.

On the bright side, Keiko is making Hao think a bit more deeply about his plans to fix the various problems that he sees affecting the world.

I wonder if Hao trusts Keiko, Yoh, or both.

WOAH I have this warm feeling all over me! I’m so thankful for this story! It was really beautiful! The idea you wrote is genious and original, and it was perfectly developed. You showed us what could have been and I’m loving having this happy Asakura family (FINALLY). The end was amazing too, so heartwarming. I’m so glad there’s hope for them. All their relationships were fantastic, and how you pictured Hao and every other character was neat. Again, thank you so much! I loved every single chapter.

Yes Hao all you need to do is change people's environments it's definitely helped with a good portion of corrupt people.

OK, ok, ok. I loved it! I loved it so much! I think this was an important chapter because we know now that Hao actually cares about Yoh too! I mean, we could see Yoh loving Hao since the beginning, but now we know he cares about him too! Oh, and I think is great how the relationship between Keiko and Hao is working, because he’s his little baby, but he’s also and adult with a really strong perspective about the world. We’ll see if Keiko manages to change his mind. And Mikihisa is great! Such a shame he’s leaving, but is the smartest thing to do. This chapter was a gift, thank you so much!

Thank you for updating! I can't wait for more _

You can really tell Keiko has grown up as a rather sheltered person on a first world country here. so sure the world and humans can change for the better, so sure that humanity is capable of growth as a whole. So sure it will be growth that she will like even then. You can relly tell for all shes suffered in the past years or so on her own, that it was a rather gentle suffering, one that hundreds of millions of people live with each day. Would she say the same of she has been born into abject poverty? If she was part of a country ruled over by Warlords or a dictatorship? Would she say the same if she had grown ip with no future or had it ripped away from her instead of choosing to give it up? An interesting thought.

Also I literally cannot wait to see what happens when Hao learns just how fucked The world has gotten since he slept. Just how close it is to becoming a floating rock devoid of life from human hands and in some places already is completely unliveable due to us. What will he think of the rampant pollution? The thousands of species hunted to extinction? The fact parts of the world are so irradiated due to nuclear waste dumping they’re uninhabitable? Overfishing, spoiled oceans full of plastics (even in the bottom of the mariana trench, the most remote place on earth, we found plastic bags floating), microplastics, massive waste dumping grounds that will never biodegrade etc etc etc. So much that would prove to him his world view was right all along. How will he react to those truths? And when will he go looking for them? Because its rather obvious Keiko/anyone won’t be telling him any time soon... Though I guess thats assuming this story is even interested in tackling those potential plot points at all...