Maybe David will find a human lover of his own one day, who knows?
Well done sir!

and a grand end indeed, what a story and what great bravery, well done, Aaron you are once again a really useful writer.

I'm happy that's the end of the story.

That was a great story. David found his mother alive and now he and Emily invited Beatrice to come home to Sodor with them. Thomas and Percy are happy to see Emily again and see David is still alive.

Aaron, mate. Great job for both you and Jeremy on this. I liked the Star Wars Episode 9 ending. And I'm glad Thomas and Percy are feeling much better, now that Em's back. Throughout some of the chapters, I enjoyed learning about the GNR, Em's past on the GNR and learning about other places here in England and up in Scotland. Including Loch Eil. I had to take a look at that place on Google Images. Hope you enjoy your well deserved break. Before you go, if you are reading this, I hope you agree what I said on Chapter 3, about "Emily's Best Friend" going first, before "Emily To The Rescue" for next year, judging by the Number 12 on her tender. Also, did you know, that Em somehow keeps a maximum of five of those six-wheeled, Stirling, emerald coaches and calls it the Victorian-Express? It says so, on the IeuR's Thomas And Friends Wikia. See you next time, mate, stay safe and may the force of Thomily be with you.

Also, Diesel, 'Arry and Bert could be cross at Diesel 10's defeat if you like to put in in your stories.

That's sweet, Emily and David kissed each other on the lips. Diesel 10 is defeated and David found his mother alive. Everyone on Sodor including Thomas are happy to see David and Emily again and met Beatrice Rider.

I'm happy David found his mother and defeat Diesel 10. Now both David and Emily invited Beatrice to home to Sodor with them. Everyone including Thomas are happy to see them again and meet David's lost long mother. Now they had to hear Thomas' adventures first than Emily's first adventure and the search of David's mother. Emily and David kissed on the lips reminds me of a movie Planet of the Apes where a man kissed female monkey at the end before he returned home.

David and Emily defeat Diesel 10 and found Beatrice Rider. Now David invited his mother to come back home to Sodor. Now everyone including Thomas are reunited, they have a long story to tell all about Emily's first adventure and the search of David's mother. When David and Emily kissed each other on the lips it reminds me a movie Planet of the Apes where a man kissed female monkey at the end.

i feel the ending would have been more impactful (no pun intended) if diesel 10 didn't survive that fall and was destroyed. but at the same time it would've seemed unrealistic because david survived it as well.

other than that, i loved this story and i can't wait to see what you have in store in the future.

That was really great. David kissed Emily on the lips, that's sweet and Emily kissed him back. I'm happy David found his mother alive. Now Beatrice can go home with David and Emily back to Sodor. Thomas is happy to see love again and meet Beatrice. Now they got long stories to tell before bedtime.

David found his mother at least and reunited than Emily met her. Now Beatrice can go home with Emily and David back home to Sodor. Thomas is happy to see his love life again and meet David's mother. And they have a long stories to tell.

I am so happy that Emily, David and his mother are finally back on Sodor and Thomas and Percy are very happy to see them too. Stay Awesome

Hopefully Thomas will tell Emily about Lorenzo and Beppe and they both come to Sodor one day in your stories.

Aha. You did it, Aaron. David's reunion with Beatrice went great and I saw your reference to Sleeping Beauty there. Nice. Good luck, making two stories and I'II do my best to wait til your break's over, though it won't be easy. Any chance in the future, can you make a story of Beatrice scolding off Diesel and David interacting with Ruth and Sir Robert, should you have Marvelous Machinery appear in your stories please?