I am thinking Ren is as powerful as his father and his abilities are coming out and causing all the activity. I notice how Monk stalled on mentioning that the child in question is Mai’s . Stay safe and update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!

I am really enjoying this story. Love how you managed to convey how happy and scared Mai is. I am still sticking to my guess that Naru is the father! Stay safe and update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!

Definitely getting interesting! I like how you went present back to past then back to present. I'm excited to read what happens next!

Well that reunion did not go very well! Something tells me Ayako and Monk realize that Ren is Naru’s son. Something also tells me that Mai’s case and SPR’s case are one and the same, which will force Mai to face her past. Stay safe and update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!

author. author. heres my idea. can you keep Mai's dreams rather than making it look like she is just dreaming about cases. make it look like she is painting a pictures of how the victims die and how the killer killed them. make her analyze how they ended up where they were

author we want more. you cant sleep till this is completed. by the way cool chapter. thought it was gonna ba another paranormal story. I like that you took the police officer kind of route. but it kinda sounds like Gene died in this story. cuz of the grudges part. I hope Naru is also a Investigator from England. and Masako is like a phycayatrist( i think i just killed this word). Monk n Ayako work at the medical or autopsy group of thier division. and John n Yasu are part of her investigation team. but anyways. cant wait for the completion of the upcoming chapters. can we have a bit of long chapters. not all of them just some. If we can. please n thank you. have a great day or night.

I understand. You are taking us back in time to explain how Mai ended up with a child. I like what she is doing nw. Update when you can and stay safe. MaiXNaru forever!

author. author. look what you got yourself into. your gready reader and now greedier. now you must post more chapters of this story. cuz we womt let you sleep till this story is completed. now author. post the next chapter.

Interesting beginning. Of course by your description there is no mistaking who is the father of Mai’s son, the father is the one and only Naru. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this story. Stay safe and update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!