So I finally finished the story. I really liked it. I wasn’t sure I’d like Sebastian being his stepbrother, but you surprised me. I loved the Quartie at the end. I hope a sequel is in the works with more emphasis on that painting. Far too few people write that anymore.

I loved the ending! Sebastian’s speech even brought a tear to my eye. Can’t wait to see what you write next x

Great ending! I think wrapping it up on a nice, even 20 chapters is perfect. And the wedding makes sense as an ending, even though I love this and would have kept following for as many more as you wrote. (Perhaps that sequel we discussed, when you’re not busy...) I’m so glad Artie’s date with Quinn turned out great and that he actually wound up being thankful for Sebastian’s meddling. I enjoyed some of your fun, little details like Sebastian jumping on Artie during family pictures, sweet moment of Sebastian meeting Artie’s dad, all the Artie/Quinn stuff, the moment with Watson, Sebastian’s speech, and Puck apologizing for calling Sebastian’s face punchable (and then the whole “he didn’t do that” and “no, not to your face”). I love that Quinn says she agrees with Puck’s speech and that a new pairing happens. And that is why, at some point, you’ll need to do a sequel after some time has passed ;-) Maybe Quinn’s step-sister could be the Gerber baby.

Love this story! Artie’s such and underrated character so it’s nice to see some stories about him. Great job :)

May i begin by saying that i did not know that you weren't finished with this story so that was a nice surprise to came. I would also like to say that this story is freaking incredible. i love it so much. please continue on with it. i would also like to see a day where it is the anniversary of artie and nancys car accident and the way that sebastian would comfort artie on that sad day. i think that is all. if i hadn't already said, i love this story.

With love, Livi

This is a great story. I’ve noticed that the majority of this story is about Artie being in a wheelchair. I think I’d be cool to see the characters stray away from that just for a bit to see them interact with the parents. Maybe have them interact with Harold and Nancy for a part. Anyways I’m loving this story, it’s probably my favorite part of the day. Keep up the great work.

I loved it! One of my favorite things was the text conversation between Sebastian and Tina, that started back before Sebastian’s phone got messed up for awhile. Loved how Tina told him Artie was capable of finding his own date. But Artie’s excitement over Sebastian setting him up with Quinn was cute. Also — I called that one. I was loving Sebastian and Kurt teaming up to improve Artie’s hair and him encouraging Artie to wear his contacts. (Nice touch about how Artie wasn’t embarrassed over the contents of his bag & Sebastian didn’t make a big deal either.) The wedding party’s wardrobe was cute! Love the Warblers blazers with red dresses. And Harrison’s speech was extra sweet. I enjoyed seeing them becoming a family at last

This was the perfect way to show how Sebastian’s learning to be part of the group and how they’re all learning to accept him. Loved the shock from the others when Artie made good on his promise to go on the water slide with them at the end. I can’t really say much about the parts I added, only just that you used them well and I was so curious how it would fit together to tell the story. You did it well. Now I want to know what Tina says in response to Sebastian’s meddling. Maybe I’ll suggest something

Wow, it ended up being a really long chapter! And a very enjoyable read, from start to finish. I always love any excuse to have Artie develop a better fashion sense in the story. I liked that he sort of knew what looked good all along, despite not wearing any of it. Griffin’s surprise entrance, I loved! And I liked seeing Sebastian come to new realizations about Artie as they were traveling. Loved the details about Artie’s jealousy, when he watched him with Ella and felt like Sebastian was taking his place as her older brother. Griffin’s reassuring words were lovely. You definitely felt for Artie as he compared himself, physically, to Sebastian and I just loved that his older brother already knew what he was thinking. Thanks for using some of my ideas! I’m so honored to have a role in this.

Within first sentence you lost me. Artie's an only child

This was worth the wait. I really liked how Sebastian couldn’t figure out the casual hangout that they were having as a group because it’s just not the Warblers’ style. All the nicknames! My favorite was Tina Warrior Princess. I liked how Sebastian was observant enough to notice Artie checking her out. My favorite thing has to be how, when Sebastian was bashing his wardrobe, Artie realized he didn’t even know why he dresses that way and that Sebastian has a point. Will we see any of this shopping trip? Hope so!

Are you going to write in sebastians POV soon? love the story btw

Oh! I loved this so much! I’ll back up and start with the fact that I liked how you described Art’s bachelor pad, how he’d gone to the trouble to make all the modifications that he could for Artie’s visits. And I liked that Artie said fishing was one of those activities that made him feel like a normal guy. I liked him realizing Sebastian was right, that his accident hadn’t caused the parents to divorce. Good detail, too, about how they’d had to actually band together for a couple more years before eventually separating. I liked Art’s relating about his own experiences with Artie’s step-uncle, too. Great, great chapter, one of my favorites in the whole story. Keep ‘me coming!

I laughed at this: “Blaine had told Sam, who told Finn, who told Rachel, who told everybody else.” Typical Rachel! I also liked “Watson the Wheelchair Warbler,”of course, and that this was the excuse they cooked up for his presence. I was glad everyone was supportive of Artie after they found out the secret. Oh, randomly, I loved Puck saying Sebastian had a punchable face. And looking forward to all you have in store next!

I thought you handled the stuff with Karofsky well. I liked Artie and Sebastian’s private conversation, and Artie’s alluding to thoughts he’d had about how it’s only four years and there’s life after high school. I liked how you moved the flashback to happen a little sooner, during their conversation. Again, you added description and background to the dialogue we saw in the episode that made it better. Also, I’m glad Sebastian said what he did to Blaine. Can’t wait for more!