Good action w/the Empress and OP Nick. :) Enjoyed the others doing their part back on the island. Also that Mat cure; amazing how the X-Powder can give the cure. Nice writing of Jerry and the others bringing the cure. And Siren's decision to stay in that form. Fun ending line.

Glad you liked the idea on trimming text. Thanks!

More fine work, both of you.

An idea for a quick start to chapters- maybe leave out repeated info from the previous one since people can get it all there. :) Good info from Siren, then resolve to join them. Fun line from Alex on the swimming gear, then a solid action scene w/the fish enemy. Bridget and Siren were interesting in this part.

I wonder if villains would try to destroy Malibu now. Well, they may not know that they moved there. :) Quite the dilemma for Mat, then discovery from Nick on the new technique breaking the bear's mind control. Nice line from Sam on needing to go into the obvious trap. High tension w/the dangerous enemy at the end!

Fine work from you both, as always, even if I'm having trouble keeping track of The Blue Time Ranger's characters. He's a big Anime fan, I'm sure, or something like it.

Hey, a cast list. Well, I know the wonderful Laura Bailey, so Bridget's got a great voice. :) Interesting start w/the villains and escape from a creature. Co-ed dorm rooms surprised me at first, but I looked it up, and it can happen. Fun scene of their getting matched up. Good mention of Clover being turned part cat and dog by those two.

I liked the mysterious sighting by Alex. Good tension w/the dangerous beast, then assist by Siren. Nice use of Nick's power to communicate. Solid reveal of her origin & theorizing by the group. What a dangerous enemy at the base; smart to use the jetpack that way by Sam. Then their deciding to escape after it broke loose from capture. Enjoyed the thought on majors, and Jerry scene at WOOHP. Fun chapter. :)

Interesting title. Helga and Fox, remember them a bit. Helga had Clover mutated into a cat thing, and Fox had Alex kidnapped by a talking ape, or monkey. Nice to bring back one or two shot villains, the joys of fanfics, right?