I love this story. Bravo.

You should do this) I really want more Oliver/Talia fanfics, plus your writing is good) Maybe less flashbacks that are the same with the show, cause we all know it)

Dude, this is amazing so far. I understand you said it'll take a while to update but I really hope you update it soon.

please continue this, it's very good

It's a good start to a good story, but there are a few holes.

They are a little structural things like when you described the blinking Arrowhead in the first sentence and then the last sentence say there was a green light blinking. It's doubling up unnecessarily.

A slightly larger issue comes when, at the very end, Tommy says that he's saw Laurel and Oliver leave the party together, worried they went mano a mano. In the show this works when they leave to go upstairs to chat and then Oliver leaves to confront Adam Hunt and we don't see Laurel again. It doesn't work in this story because Oliver doesn't leave and is instead seen at the party the entire time and Laurel confronted her father and then presumably left with him. And then as for the line where he is thinking about how Laurel says the island change him, if not made clear that Oliver is there watching them, and she doesn't mention that the island change him in that seen like it didn't show.

You have to watch out for these kind of changes between your story and the show otherwise things don't make sense.

Awesome. Keep up the good work.

More Oliver/Talia is always a great thing. Hope your story goes well

all i saw when red the description was rewrite of arrow and the pairing and i am thinking will Oliver be an anti hero this time... can't wait for the next chapter

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