Reviews for Moonlit World
D.N.Works chapter 7 . 8/21
Woah...this one was one interesting chapter. So much going on man!
Fist we have the other kingdoms, the warring kingdoms. While they clearly have tougher people from the usual four kingdoms, I guess it was silly to think just because they have tougher people all problems would go away. I'm taking interest especially in the war between Olympus and Camelot. I can imagine, Arthur vs Hercules!
Where we see Proto Arthur is son to Arturia while friends with Shiro, who brings bad news that the expansion of the Yakuza in Vale is a failure. Plus the conflict between the Gods and humanity with a war slowly coming.
Then we go back to Beacon, where Jaune shows his bravery and his sister, while learning all this started simply because of Yang through strange means. Not gonna lie, to hear this dude and his wife ready to kill these people simply because of Yang's mark...that sounds crazy, but I guess that's their ideology. Luckily, just as the wife prepared to give death, Ozpin/Ozma shows them that he ain't rolling around and actually hurt her. Already I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Question though, if Roman is Mister M's son...then does that means Fran is his sister? Wonder what their relationship is like.
123ABIR123 chapter 7 . 8/20
One of the best rwby fanfics ever written pls update soon.
Kayen1024 chapter 7 . 8/20
Okay, I am curious about the identity of this husband and wife pair. This whole conversation about slaves to the gods have given me a much better idea of how things work in this world. All the cities that belong to RWBY and it's cast are living in ignorance of various significant truths about the world. I mean it's not that surprising most people don't even know about the existence of Salem or the holy relics and everything Ozpin has done has always been in accordance with the god of light's wishes. In the world of RWBY, no one has ever questioned the actions of those two gods, except for Salem, and her motivations for doing so was never noble and completely self centered. Since the two Brothers called this planet an experimen,t and the god of light said that they would return when Ozpin put the four relics together, it's possible that they didn't create this planet but are aliens from far away, that decided to use this planet as a testing ground. In the Nasuverse, the Dead Apostle Ancestors are aliens from the moon, so it's not that weird, for their to be aliens from outside of the solar system. Regardless of the specifics, it's obvious that there are multiple communities unaffiliated with Ozpin that know of Salem, which is already ground breaking. My question is does Ozpin know there are other gods besides the two Brothers?
furukawa023 chapter 7 . 8/20
Interesting world building also confusing at the same time it really intriguing how this would go to.
VGBlackwing chapter 7 . 8/20
...HUH? WTF IS THIS CHAPTER I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT HAPPEN?
SaberFan117 chapter 7 . 8/20
Let me guess... Sieg is Jeanne's husband
Ren chapter 1 . 8/3
Oooh-

An Arknights reference, hehe.
Kayen1024 chapter 6 . 8/3
Okay this chapter was seriously confusing. You hinted at the end of a previous chapter that Illya was dead, so who exactly gave RWBY this info? The words little fairy sound like they can only apply to Illya after all. Also Ruby really must be delusional if she thinks she can so easily show that they are trustworthy to Shirou and get a personal meeting with him.
D.N.Works chapter 6 . 8/3
While Ruby's though on showing him good is possible... Sadly, it's nigh impossible considering the crap he went through. Although I am confused about one thing. Why would someone just GIVE RWBY Intel they could use let aside even know they wanted it? I hope you explain that soon, because that felt to quick they just got that Information in a second.
Also, crazy cliffhanger.
ToriSenkiTan chapter 6 . 8/3
CLIFFHANGER-WHYYY?!
SaberFan117 chapter 6 . 8/2
Good Luck on convincing him Ruby just be careful of being broken once you see the truth of reality and the what lies in the path of becoming a hero is a double-edge sword. Oh Team RWBY, get ready to becoming punching bag to Servants...
FatherKirei chapter 5 . 7/31
Esta historia es brutalmente buena, un refrescante respiro de varias historias de Shirous siendo el héroe y ahora siendo un antihéroe.

Espero con ansias apenas contenidas la siguiente actualizacion.
Nolose262 chapter 5 . 7/23
Me gusta la historia

Es interesante el cómo la estás desarrollando, como el equipo RWBY y JNPR descubren lo duro y cruel que puede ser el mundo, donde sus acciones tienen consecuencias y que hay gente que podría vencerlos fácilmente.

Espero ver más sobre el impacto que ha tenido la familia Fujimura y los otros servants.

Sigue así
Lad Lad chapter 3 . 7/22
I have no earthly idea what's going on but I'm hoping that by going back through it I'll be able to read it coherently.
Shattering chapter 4 . 7/21
Bunch of gibberish that is going nowhere
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