| Reviews for A New Life |
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thomaspheasant chapter 1 . 7/20 please update immediately |
thomaspheasant chapter 1 . 7/20 please update immediately |
zero fullbuster chapter 1 . 7/14 love it. please write more soon. |
TheWhitlockGirl chapter 1 . 6/23 Just found your story and am really enjoying it so far. Looking forward to reading more! |
god of all chapter 1 . 6/22 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
alix33 chapter 1 . 6/21 I loved the way Harry made that list. Yay! for Harry tucking his notes into the back pocket of his jeans. Did you mean "so inbred they lose"? By now I am surprised Harry isn't full blown boiling with livid rage (the way I am), never mind feeling a sharp spike of anger. That outraged little dragon sounded adorable. You meant "the Potter's warm magic, the Blacks' colder magic...and the Peverells' strangely still and calm magic". |
Fellow chapter 1 . 6/20 This is good and I hope you keep updating this |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 6/18 Oh... another story where they think ability at a subject can be quantified through blood tests. How does magic know he is a transfiguration or a runes prodigy? That makes no bloody sense; it would be like a blood test somehow telling me that I’m good at math. This also applies to legilimency, occlumency and necromancy. I have no idea what dragon master is supposed to be, but it seems like some bullshit that you thought would be cool (also, why does the blood test know that it WAS blocked, or in what way it was unblocked?). The animagus transformation, parseltongue and beast speech are probably the only abilities a blood test could determine as you could say that not everyone has an animal form and those that do have a unique tint to their magic, which can also be said about parseltongue and beast speech, things that supposedly can’t be taught. I also just want to say that no protagonist is better than the one that works hard to overcome the odds, and you’ve decided to start this story by just giving him all of these inherited abilities, wealth and political power that will put him above the rest. He’s not fighting against the odds anymore; he’s punching down and that really isn’t that interesting. Only making it worse is that I can confidently assume you will make him weaker/dumber at a whim just to force a feeling of false suspense like every other author who screws up by making their protagonist too powerful, too early. That means you’ve got an uninteresting story with an inconsistent protagonist... joy. |