- Well, I didn't expect that Yagura would be under that kind of Jutsu. Tsunade seems freed, but Menma and Soshi were the ones that were pulling the strings all the time? Well, this is getting better.

this chapter was nice
but you shuld really try to" keep your headwhile writing this and even if it takes time
try not to make mistake,my friend

rest all is really great

U can take a break between writing
the reason being
you will be able to concentrate more and be able to write without any mistake

take in consideration

rest all assured

good luck
actually
good work
hard work

review you ask for
here goes nothing
the story is going great so far
it is just that you mess up the sequence
no offence , but try to keep the scenes as clear as possible

rest all is very good considering the fact that you are not making them literal op god's killing machine

good work!
keep it up!
(if you have time to ,that is)

Can we get more?

I thought that they won't be strong from the get go?

So can we get more chapters?

mendokse I thought it was mendukse

My fav clan is Inuzuka. I mean dogs for life

please upload another chapter

Aburama a mings. I would like float on bugs 24/7

I love reading this great book you know

Hey I love Shisui in this fanfiction

I'm interested in this story but the grammar is really bad and makes it hard to read

This is so good! I can't wait until the next update.

I am enjoying this story so far.