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elizabethB88 chapter 8 . 5h "And I'm not really asking. I was just trying to be polite." I love Bill. He's so funny. And always taking in double meanings, lol. That was a great conversation between him and Nathan. I like that he recognized that Nathan would put Allie first, and therefore would put a family first, whereas Jack always put his job and fighting the good fight first. That was a great scene. Umm...Nathan needs to snap out of it! He's best for Elizabeth, and he needs to take Bill's advice: "Don't be a coward." Thank God for Bill. He always speaks the truth. Gah, poor Nathan! He's so self-sacrificial, but I hope he realizes that he can love Elizabeth and ask her to love him too. They are so perfect together, he just needs to realize that :) |
Missela chapter 8 . 7/21 Yes, it will be a painful conversation. I'm not looking forward to it because I expect two hearts will be broken. I am eager to read the rest of the story, though. So to get to that we have to have the hard conversation first. |
metacaroliner chapter 8 . 7/21 Come on Nathan! |
blizzardgirl93 chapter 8 . 7/21 Eugh Nathan! Don’t be such a coward as Bill said! Can’t wait to see how this story is going to play out. This chapter was really well written and it was nice to spend some time with Nathan’s thoughts even though he is being an idiot lol Can’t wait to read more! |
SaSeLi777 chapter 8 . 7/21 OMG... why do people always have to try to speak for other people instead of really listen to them! |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15 I really like your story! Can't wait to read more... |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15 So good! |
elizabethB88 chapter 7 . 7/15 Yay! They *finally* talk! I love how you wrote the interaction between Elizabeth and Nathan. I kept waiting for her to hug him or touch him in some way, and the fact that you had her put her hand on his heart, and then he put his hand on hers, was so beautiful! And I liked the nod to the plaque and "always do what you're afraid to do." Great chapter! |
SaSeLi777 chapter 7 . 7/15 Dang! At last Nathan talked... a little! If only people realized that asking for help when one needs it is strength - and that it takes more strength and courage to live for someone than to die for someone! Yes, I definitely needed this chapter. It hurts my heart to see Nathan, Elizabeth, and Allie hurting so much when talking things out will help them all - especially because of the love they share! Looking forward to more! |
Missela chapter 7 . 7/15 Well that went okay. They are finally moving forward even if it is only a little. I am glad that Allie is spending the night with Elizabeth. Writing in a journal should be beneficial for her. |
blizzardgirl93 chapter 7 . 7/15 Great chapter! I’m so glad Nathan opened up to Elizabeth eventually, it’s definitely a step in the right direction. |
BlossomOfEdelweiss chapter 6 . 7/10 Wow...I hope she runs into Nathan soon and gets to talk to him, maybe when she goes to his house to deliver the book. This is a great story so far, can't wait to read more. |
elizabethB88 chapter 6 . 7/9 Oooh, Lucas and Fiona are going to have a conversation...that'll be fun to see what she wants to say to him! And I just love how Allie's friends are there for her in this chapter, and how she opens up to Elizabeth about what's on her mind. Little Women is a great book - I'm glad Elizabeth recommended it. And I can't wait to hear the conversation Nathan and Elizabeth will have...that is coming soon, right? :) Love your story so far, can't wait for what's next! |
Missela chapter 6 . 7/9 Opal sure has a kind heart! It is wonderful that the children of Hope Valley have learned to be there for someone in need just like the adults. Now I look forward to a possible interaction between Nathan and Elizabeth when she drops off the book. |
Andi chapter 5 . 7/3 Excited, hopefully there will be a few encounters before they actually talk |