Hmm, soon Konoha will fall anyways keep up the great work!

Excellently done first chapter.

super

Danzō and the Civilian Council really screwed Konoha with their chances. Hope it was worth it since there is no way that Konoha will survive the combined forces of Iwa, Kumo, and Oto the way it is now.

I'd say that Konoha, Oto, Iwa, and Kumo be RAZED to the ground! Souls of Danzo and his associates will be send to the FIERY PITS OF HELL! And finally for the betrayers that betrayed Naruto will be KILLED!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Hmm, an interesting so keep up the great work!

Interesting story and I like it! *Thumbs UP!* Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me!

I see finally started to write this story idea Amir, not bad. i hope it continues

Let me guess, Naruto was banished during the Retrieval Arc. I always found the entire scenario hypocritical because it made everything Sasuke said about the village true (regardless of the good points found Canon), and despite those fact, authors still made said man a retarded spoiled brat (when he was actually recovering from his trauma in Part I until Itachi ruined everything) simply because they hate him. In fact, if Sasuke finds out Naruto was banished, he'll immediately become spiteful of Konoha because despite their fight in the Valley of the End, Sasuke still values their bond. He wasn't loyal to the village per se, simply his family (It was his motivation for his revenge, after all) and he certainly consider Naruto as his closest friend.

Having said that, I hope Naruto broke out Sasuke because of it and left together with him. Believe me, not once have I read a Western Empire fic where Naruto and Sasuke found a common ground because of the incident and just said "Screw Konoha". Besides, if the latter learns of his plan, he'll realize it's in Sasuke's best interest to go on a wartorn nation since it would be the best place to grow stronger.

Is Warhammer 40k gonna be in this crossover too? Because y'know Naruto can become The Man-Emperor and create his Sons?

Has potential but is clunky.

Cue the dramatic revelation music