Wow, that was awesome. I hesitated before reading your story, because I've seen stories with similar premises with Tonks, and few were good. But you managed to capture the characters quite well. I liked the pacing and character development. Nary a scene seemed forced or too fast (save for Harry getting injured, I felt as though it happened to soon and I thought the outcome was very predictable).
It was easy to read and follow your narration, I really liked the overall feeling and the way you managed to portray adult relationships and their darker sides. While I agree with you, that the Remus you developed is not canon, I thought you portrayed him very well, I didn't have the feeling he was a horrible person.

All in all a very good story which I enjoyed reading a lot, especially as there are few HPNT stories as captivating as this one.
Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

I think Harry could have being perfect for Fleur or Tonks if any of them would have waited a little before marrying. Tonks is very immature for her age and happy go lucky kind of girl and Harry is too mature for his age and sirius. So a little more years in in him like 20 years old and he is the amazing guy. If he has therapy and doesn’t marry Ginny. Ginny is jot for him, she had a crush on a hero, and in her life As a free spirit she was she wanted to be far away from home being a quidich star and after a journalist she never was home. She never has the same hours of Harry. The kids had their grand parents and Harry and occasionally her. I think she though she would married a star like she wanted to be and they go partying, nit the best marriage for him or her.

So I think Tonks, Fleur, Hermione and Luna could be good partners for Harry for different reasons.
ToNks because they would find balance and happiness also laughs and have similar jobs they could see each other a lot more.
Fleur because both want normalcy and love and they would find it in each other they find stability too.
And Hermione because they are compatible With a mature Hermione specially (I know young Hermione has a lot of issues but mostly is lack of social graces and blind fate in authority.) Because they always had similar goals and would had similar hours in the ministry. They would get the other better, friends, partners and love too.

Luna because they both had suffered and they can get each other worlds and find understanding and insight and love

great story love how this turns out

Amazing! I agree with you, Remus isn't that OOC in your story. I can see him do this, because it's something he is inclined to do, running away. I loved it! Thank you!

Welcome to the best ship in the fandom. They called us madmen, but then we produced such outrageously gorgeous romances they relented.
Also this plot is lovely- because we all know that Remus had a death wish and nothing JK can say will make us believe there wasn’t something going on with Sirius.
I really liked the story pacing as well, it punctuates the emotional turmoil of their falling out quite well, and the transition to Harry was strong because of the POV choice. I actually think it you could have added a scene where you more thoroughly ruminated on her growing attraction to him, but that’s really just my personal preference shining through.
Btw if you want Chelsyb’s, just reach out- she’s the patron saint of HarryXTonks.

My first story embracing this pairing was also inspired by a conversation I had with Chaos Snow Kitsune. Also, he pointed out this story to me. I thought you did a wonderful job with this. It was very believable for why Tonks and Remus broke up and why Tonks and Harry got together. I liked Fleur helping to push them together. Yep, sometimes it takes a near death tragedy to make people realize they need to act. Very strongly emotional and all-around great story.

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This was fan-freakin-tastic! Thank you so much for sharing. There really isn't enough Honks in the world.

You're about right on Remus. The thing that saved his legacy was getting killed in the Hogwarts battle. That's a horrible unforgiving thought, but he left Tunks pregnant and trotted off to the werewolf packs when the going got a little tough and Harry had to ream him a new ass hole to get him to step up. So yes, you have drawn a reasonable extension to his development (or lack there of). He really did leave Harry in the learch for twelve years - inexcusable.

Awaiting more.

one of the best stories I have read in a while, loved it and the pairing. you write Tonks and Harry together really well.

Chaos Snow Kitsune recommended the story to me and I quite honestly love It, well done l.

That... that was better then I ever expected. You did an absolutely wonderful job with this.

I did see a few typos though.

"She still hadn't got around to confessing her feelings, had been putting it off, now she wish she had, wasn't sure if Harry would even make it. She wanted Teddy desperately in that minute and sent her Patronus to Fleur who had Harry once again."

I'm fairly certain Fleur does not have once again. I think the husbands of the wizarding world would have to start hiding away their wives otherwise. XD

There was also a bit near the end when they were talking about where Andy was:

""Don't worry, he's with Molly and Arthur. The boy loves getting spoiled by his grandparents." He rolled his eyes, if Andy Arthur wasn't with his parents, the likelihood was that he was with his grandparents, not that they minded, they loved every one of their grandparents, biological or not. She felt a little silly for panicking, she should have guessed really"

Pretty sure it should be "they loved every one of their grandchildren, biological or not."

You are right, from what we have seen of Remus, going off for days at a time is certainly not OOC of him.

A very good story that has kept the people in character, imo.

Just a minor gripe, jumping in front of curse meant for Tonks, seriously? You could have had Harry augment her shield with his own and still got the same impact, this would also tie in with the auror partner thing, I mean, this jumping in front of curses habit would have been trained out of him, right?

Anyways, I enjoyed the story very much, great work!