Reviews for Shattered
EndlessStarlights chapter 3 . 9/23
I'm still curious whether you'll include the 7 disasters from grand cross or not
Adventreader221 chapter 3 . 9/22
i love how you pointed out such a large factor that most tend to ignore about Elizabeth and Meliodas. The curses placed upon them are really an incovenience, especially for Eoizabeth as we have seen that Meliodas cannot die and whenever he does he still remembers everything unlike Elizabeth. I feel compelled to write that in a personal pov that from what I have seen in the flashbacks between both Meliodas and Elizabeth that Meliodas subcosciously (perhaps not) manipulates Elizabeth into loving him when he should just leave well enough alone.

I believe that seeing as Naruto literally holds the curse placed upon her in his hands he should destroy it and let Ekizabeth live life the way she wants to so she can find her own happiness and not one made up by a manipulation caused by Meliodas. So do Elizabeth a solid by getting rid of that thing.

As for Meliodas, I think you should temove his curse as well but do it in such a way that even the moat vile demon doesn't expect it. Hell do it in front of Merlin to make her more curious about his power.

Now I know they aren't here yet but do not pair King with Diane. It is thr same reason for Elizabeth and Meliodas really if you think about it.

As for the pairing for the harem Iwanna see how you go with thjs idea,

Naruto x Jericho x Guila x Fresia (Weird Fang Knight) x Diane x Elizabeth x Veronica x Margaret x Derieri x Gelda

Kill off the Commandments that are 100% loyal to Demon King and those who want to be left alone can fend for themselves.

I SHIP ESCANOR AND MERLIN
roncarlreyesevangelista chapter 3 . 9/20
Actually for Elizabeth to work on your pairings you pretty much need to destroy the curse so yeah i think you must, and also in the manga they explain that the curse the Demon King and Supreme Deity put on both Meli and Eli is that no matter what happens they'll always meet and fall in love with each other
Guest chapter 3 . 9/16
I’m exciting to the next chapter.

I have suggestions for the harem:
- Deldry, Derieri, Diane, Elizabeth Liones, Ellatt, Gelda, Gerheade, Guila, Jenna, Jericho, Jillian, Margaret Liones, Matrona, Merlin, Sennett, Solaseed, Veronica Liones, Vivian, Zaneri.
Robdor Peltan chapter 1 . 9/16
This story is pretty awesome so far! And as far as pairings go, the only one I actually gave a shit about in the manga was Ban and Elaine. The relationship between Meliodas and Elizabeth always seemed a bit weird to me but that's just my opinion.
biob1 chapter 3 . 9/10
Awesome job hope to see more soon
Riba Nyabom chapter 3 . 9/9
Well that was an interesting loved the bit with the clones.
Looking forward to more.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/8
have derieri in the harem
WhateverPlus chapter 3 . 9/8
I like this chapter, continue please.
theschnitzelgod chapter 3 . 9/8
Great chapter
Xud10a chapter 3 . 9/4
Wow, I never really thought about they’re relationship like that. If they don’t end up together I wonder how that’s going to change Meliodas. I faintly remember that when he got his powers back, Liz is what helped him come back and not get trapped in the loop he was. If they don’t end up together how is that going to change? And I can’t help but wonder what else will Change without Liz being there to support meliodas. Hope you update soon!
Taos144 chapter 3 . 9/4
I honestly never thought about their relationship that way. It does make sense since the curse would only activate if she met meliodas, and he always chose to seek her out. Either way, I hope she gets together with Naruto since it would be more interesting to see how the story moves forward without the original relationship.

P.S. Love the fanfic and hope you update more often.
fpinheiro96 chapter 3 . 9/4
Great chapter! I agree with you, when you say that the relationship between Elizabeth and Meliodas was based on manipulation. So I'm excited to see how you go about it in this story, though I'm for Elizabeth to be with Naruto. I can't wait to see what happens next!
TheMostCasualObserver chapter 2 . 9/3
One minor edit for you to make. I can’t blame you for not knowing this, since it’s kinda obscure and outside of the general knowledge base, but the Kusanagi isn’t a broadsword. Yes, they are both two sided blades with straight edges and a structure line down the middle, however that’s about it. The Kusanagi is actually what’s known as a Jian. It’s a single handed straight sword that originated in China in the 18th century. Again though, this is just a minor detail. You are still correct in saying that the Kusanagi was the closest sword to European style broad swords that Naruto ever saw.
NaaMaloom chapter 3 . 9/3
Wonderful story. Please update ASAP !
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