No offense dude but you are just writing canon. I thought your Sabura would be a little more dangerous like a black belt in judo, a national level kendo level swordsman and a bit smarter. Not enough to make Sabura over-power but enough to protect himself from grunt level enemies and to not look like a fool.

Nothing has seemed to change is their going to be a point of change or is this just you describing everything and using prewritten text with the very occasional *slight* diverge. Just a question.

It really felt like the orginal and I loved it but it would nice to add even more change in the story and not saying as a complaint.