Reviews for Erised
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 1 . 7/22
Gosh, now I'm all hot and bothered, lol. Great writing!
demonicshard chapter 1 . 7/5
Ohhh i like the enchanted mirror.
Please let there be more!
Lola chapter 1 . 6/23
What!? You just can't leave it here! I need to read more! Pleaseeee continue!
popsie chapter 1 . 6/22
loved this! hope you continue to write more
LaughingBeauty chapter 1 . 6/20
That was intense! Well done! I would definitely read more, should you decide to pursue it.
Jasmine Melody chapter 1 . 6/17
Damn that was fun! I just wish there was more!
Enchanted Peach Dreams chapter 1 . 6/17
I wish there was a way to give you a standing ovation for this wonderful oneshot! I am overjoyed! You wrote a nigh to perfect story. Thank you!
Rayac chapter 1 . 6/17
This reads like a one-shot, but I realllly hope you continue it. An excellent chapter that draws you immediately!
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 6/17
Great!
SmallFires chapter 1 . 6/17
This was excellent! If you decide to do more I am absolutely hooked
If it stands as a one shot it is really something. Your use of the mirror is just...wow. This is very good. Very well written and I loved every second.
hbooks chapter 1 . 6/16
Great first chapter