Oh my god, this is totally amazing so far ! Your writing is really enjoyable and the story is interesting. but on too of that, it makes me overly happy to know you're not giving up on this masterpiece. I can't wait to know more about this, you've got all my support3 good luck to you and stay safe

Wow, a new chapter so soon! I was just checking yesterday for a new chapter and I was trying to tell myself "Chill, it's only been four days. Just be patient." But then there's a new chapter right here! You're right, that was fast! Wow, Kirby's wings really DID grow! How about that? I'm glad he's back to his cheerful, sunny self :) And Meta Knight's fine too. I can't wait for the flying lessons! If I were Kirby, I'd want to show my wings to everyone as well. It would be hard for me to keep them a secret. Oh yeah, thanks for that little lesson on who the Meta-Knights are. (And the Dees.) I think that's a really smart plan Meta Knight has them for. Oh boy. He's here. I don't know where or for what purpose, but Galacta Knight is here. Sadly, Kirby doesn't realize he's real, but I'd brush it off as just a dream too. I feel like things will go downhill hard and fast at some point. And Meta Knight highlighting no trauma for Kirby...I'm a bit concerned. Thanks for another chapter so soon! Hope you're able to take care of everything! (Oh yeah, that mirror isn't another reference, is it? Just a bit curious...) Thanks for writing, hope you have a great rest of the day/night/week!

Woah, this chapter feels like a big step! :o It might be a little weird, but I actually don't know Kirby (as a franchise) very well. I think the only Kirby game I've played is Star Allies, and I've only done a bit of that. Aside from the anime and a few various videos on YouTube, I haven't been very exposed to Kirby as a whole. All of that is to say that I don't know Sailor, not Bandana Dee very well (if he's done something or stuff like that), not the Meta Knights too well (unless they're just people under Meta Knight), or even Galacta Knight. Maybe I should do research :( I'm a bit excited to see Galacta Knight here though, since I still feel like he's a big deal. I probably heard this from theory, but is he supposed to be future Kirby? (Or Kirby's dad maybe?.. XD) No idea...Anyway, I wonder what exactly he wants, and how he's gonna get it, as well as if he'll come back. Will he only appear in visions? Wait a second...Is this storm his doing?! :o It might make sense. Will Kirby remember him and tell Meta Knight? Seems important. Speaking of Kirby, did his wings actually grow? Then again, they grew in his last vision when they didn't in reality, so maybe not just yet. I can't believe I haven't even gotten to Meta Knight yet. I was feeling bad for him when he was blaming himself :( Not thinking about the infirmary is normal, though, if something else you think is more important comes up first. I don't think it's his fault :( Or maybe I'm biased. Either way, I hope he doesn't feel bad for long. And that he doesn't get sick or something from all the rain. I can see how it'd be tricky to write his emotions since he doesn't seem to show them a lot. I think you're doing a great job though; because this situation is unusual and heavily involving Kirby and his health, I think Meta Knight's bound to show more emotion than usual. So yeah, excellent job with that :D She's new to me, but Sailor's great. Thanks to her for finding that tool. (It's really cool that you actually searched it up! I feel like I have to do those things, too.) Because of that, Kirby's wings won't be mangled. Hopefully. So, hurray! I really hope Kirby doesn't go into a panic when he wakes up. Poor little guy. Things are getting tougher and tougher. But Meta Knight's there every step of the way! Oh yeah, thanks also for explaining who knew about Meta Knight's wings. I was wondering about that. Thank you so much for updating so quickly! I'm eager to see new chapters, but again, take all the time that you need! Have another thanks for writing, (and for reading this monster of a review ;) and I hope you have a great rest of the day/night!

I'm always happy to see a new chapter! Sorry I'm a day late again! I really love the fact that we get such a clear glimpse into what everyone is thinking and feeling. It's amazing! I'd feel just like Sword felt when he had to explain what happened with Kirby to an angry Meta Knight. I'm glad things turned out okay though. You don't EVER want to see Meta Knight with red eyes. Also, was that a reference to that game where Meta did take over/attempt to take over Dreamland? Blade drawing with Kirby is cute! I can imagine them lying on the floor together doodling with Sword watching over them :) Kirby being surprised that Meta Knight has a mouth is funny, but it makes a lot of sense XD He's in a lot of pain right now however...I can only imagine how awful it feels. Meta Knight is wonderful at taking care of Kirby though. He'll make sure nothing unnecessary happens, like he just demonstrated. Dedede WOULD be very annoying to deal with. Great job to Sword and Blade for holding him off. I wonder where Meta Knight is off to? My guess is Whispy Woods, but who knows? (Well, the author does of course!) Hopefully Kirby isn't too scared of falling whenever he gets to try his wings out. Well, that's all for now! Once again this review feels messy, but I'm happy to hear you enjoy reading them! Hope you enjoy your summer break, take all the time you need! Thank you so much for writing, and have a good rest of the day/night!

!Good story!

Whooo, new chapter! I'm sorry I'm late! DX I forgot what I was doing the day you uploaded, but I was really busy yesterday and only saw the new chapter last night when I had to sleep. I'll try to be faster next time! Meta Knight's character is very enjoyable! You write him amazingly well! I don't ever feel like they go out-of-character. You do a wonderful job! I can imagine how Kirby feels being ecstatic that he's not the only one. So sweet :) After all the pain he's had, I'm glad he gets a great day with Sword and Blade! But wow, his wings coming today or tomorrow. Like Kirby contemplated, that's exciting AND worrying at the same time. However, I'm sure Kirby can overcome any challenges that come his way, especially with help! Oop, looks like Sword and Blade were eavesdropping XD I wonder how much they heard, and how surprised/amazed they are. Thanks so much for updating! Looking forward to the next one, but take the time that you need. Have a good rest of the day/night!

Finally!
It's been such a long time since i've last read a really good story on here. Very well written, especially the description of the emotions! The story concept is great and they never go out of character, everything has a reason behind it.
Can't wait to hear more from you, thank you!

Hoorayyyyy, another chapter! I checked frequently and almost danced in happiness when I saw it was updated! Thanks for a new chapter so fast! This chapter was soooo good! I loved reading about Meta Knight's thoughts and emotions. All of the details are wonderful! I love the fact that his eyes change colors with different emotions. You wrote it well! Poor Kirby is getting overwhelmed by everything that's happening. All while he's so young, too. I'm glad he has someone there to help him. I wonder how Meta Knight went through this? Hmmm. It's cute that Kirby can see Sword and Blade as older brothers. Them snickering at Kirby hugging Meta Knight only for him to silence them with a glance was funny too XD I'm super eager for another chapter, but I'll be as patient as I can and wait until it comes out. I'll do my best to hold out! I really like the cover art by the way! Thank you so much for writing and I hope you have a great rest of the day/night!
P.S. I really appreciate it when authors respond to viewers, so thanks for that too!

I was just randomly looking at Kirby stories for once, and I happened onto this one! It sounds interesting! The whole 10 years thing is throwing me off a bit since it's like "What?! Adults?! Everyone's older, oh my gosh!" but it's cool, I'll get used to it. Hopefully. Kirby growing wings...I'm not sure if I've read this concept. Maybe once, but I don't really remember, so maybe not. So it's not common to me! It's pretty new :D I'd say a little exciting too; I'm wondering how Kirby will handle all of the changes. He doesn't seem to be taking it too well so far. I wouldn't either though. The few Kirby fanfics I HAVE read gave me the knowledge that Fumu is Tiff and Bun is Tuff. I don't know how I'll refer to them, I guess just use their Japanese names. Maybe Kirby's growing older is affecting his time compression since he ages slower? I don't know. But poor him getting yelled at and dismissed by Fumu :( Hooray for Meta Knight saving him though! Meta Knight's my favorite, so I'm looking forward to reading how he'll help Kirby through this difficult and stressful time. We'll I think that's all for now. Sorry for this long, probably messy review. I think it's clear I'll be sticking around for a while. I'll keep an eye on this story. I really hope you update soon! Thanks for writing!