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I'm sorry but I cant continue to read this ghost should not talk and to be killed in 1 attack is bullshit.

Hollow knight stories are so much fun! Humanizing Ghost is something not a lot of people do, but personally I’m okay with it. As long as he retains his void properties (witch I believe he has) then I see the change as inconsequential, serving only to make him fit into the world better. Something that I’m all for!
Keep out the amazing work, and stay safe out there!

Boomerito first of all Ghost was transferred to this world through some god/goddess's pity for him, so in order to make that he wouldn't be seen as a "monster" you could say he has to go through some kind of transformatin. And you haven't proven wether or not Ghost is weaker then his original state. It does also say Ghost has several "metia" as the world calls it but we all know it's the charms. Last thing to say of course there is going to be repercussions for dimensional travel and transformation, also the author is following using the original story line as the guide and will of course deviate from how some of the encounters in the anime would go.

Now this is a interesting crossover.
Even if english is not your native language, it's still decent with little basic grammar errors.(Still better than some writters where, trust me lol)
With little time, it will be easily fixed.
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i now hate this thanks

Is this story gonna divert from canon or will it follow along the same lines as the anime or light novel?

Why ghost so weak... At least he can use his charm thought...

I like the story overall, but the humanization part kind of bothers me. I feel that Ghost becoming human-ish, while it did give Ghost character, nerfed its combat abilities. In-game a Vessel (or at least Ghost) can keep fighting to its full potential despite how close it is to death, and the only thing stopping it is actual death. But here Ghost loses so much stamina so quickly, and will fall with just one swipe when in-game it can take a bit of a beating, it's too weak now, and makes me lose immersion in the story.

Cool story, still following, but I just wanted to tell you what's bothering me about it.

looks good. i'm exited to see how ghost chooses to approach problems differently than subaru since as a vessel i don't know that he is capable of giving up like subaru did and he's definitely faced worse then what we've seen in the anime. i would like a proper description of what he looks like now though since i've been using the cover art as a reference but his horns haven't come up. if there is to be a ship i will root for it to be with rem, unlikely as that seems at the moment.

Nice chapter... . What ghost look like? I am curious?