This is a pretty good story so far. Thank you.

Great chapter

Will we have any interaction with AS in this story?

Ah, Christian, you live a different life. Structured, controlled, rigid in its way.

Brandy is eager to please; hope she doesn’t pass out from all that pleasure. ;) Will she soon be wanting ‘more’ from Mr. Grey?

he doesn't know what he's missing yet...

Luv luv luv!

Christian handled himself well.

Creo que la intención de conocer o tener una idea de cómo pudo ser la vida de CG antes de Ana es llamativa y se disfruta leer historia sobre ésto. pero partiendo de tu propia premisa y con el debido respeto debes cuidar unos detalles que se destacan en el canon.
1. Grace II no puede existir sin el Grace (dónde lleva a Ana por primera vez.) Entonces, eso cambiaría el desarrollo de FSOG con Ana.
2. Ninguna mujer aparte de Grace y Mía fueron invitadas a su barco nunca.
3. Está empezando a ser un millonario por tanto no puede tener The Grace y GRACE II.
4. Elliot no sé atrevería a llevar una de sus novias al barco de C: primero porque lo conoce y de hacerlo no sin preguntar a C primero o a Taylor.

Esto no es pq este realmente mal, es porque haces énfasis en lo que fue antes de Ana. Son los detalles que encontré que contradicerían la historia posteriormente.

Y creo que la inmensa mayoría saben porque Mía puede abrazarlo.

Esperando que no te ofendas, seguimos tus próximos capítulos.

Debbie seems to be a very together girl. Is part of CG jealous of Elliot’s ease with relationships?

Lily and her mom are useless. It’s no wonder CG is so annoyed by them. Despite the aggravations, CH was able to have a good day on the water. :) Thanks for the chapter!

Who would have thought Hawaiian would be CG’s pizza preference? :) Being with Brandy doesn’t seem very appealing, but I think maybe CG is so new to the Dom role and do happy to be free of Elena, that he’s feeling pretty happy with things. Thanks for the update!

Outstanding chapter, You have a great hands on knowledge of boating. Debbie was really on the ball. Did Elliot bring her as a date, or for her sailing prowess? Sweet Mia was a huge help, too. Ashley and Lily not so much!

Good God, being a Dom sounds boring as hell. What a routine it is, having to give orders for every little thing the Sub must do. "Pull out the placemats. Put them here. Reheat dinner." Ouch... where is real life in any of this?!

The episode with Brandy really freaked Christian out, He relates the fainting to his mother, Ella, death. At four years old, Christian was unable to understand the drug overdose, and felt unable to wake Ella up. I think he should terminate Brandy's contract for his own peace of mind.

so sterile...no wonder he got tired from this...