It’s great I really do like it and please if you can add Yui in mix but it’s fine if you don’t

I like the concept for the quirk in the story, I'm excited to see how youre going to have it interact with OFA. I think even if you didn't go with the harem idea seeing Izuku interact with Yui and Reiko as close friends opens a lot of doors for dry humor and fits well with a more subdued Izuku. Hope to read more soon.

First I'd like to say you've got a great idea here and looking forward to seeing what's coming up, any advice I'd have given is already in your reviews shop I won't beat the dead horse there

As for your pairing thoughts, there's potential for both really. Either Jirou alone makes him feel or a small group of girls do. That's my only real issue with harems, some people add too many women & it gets bogged or someone falls into the background

If you do add girls my votes are Momo, Mina & Tooru

Please do not make this a harem story, it is better to just focus on one sole pairing than adding an unnecessary amount of girls, plus, Jirou is one of my favourite characters and honestly when people make harem storys that include her she is mostly pushed to the background for not being as strong as charaster as the other girls of UA, if Izuku is just friends with the other girls then that's fine just don't make unnecessary pairings around Izuku, other than that I can see this story going some wear and will continue to follow it's development as long as you continue writing it.

Interesting quirk idea! Looking forward to future chapters.

Looks interesting. Please don't make it a harem. Like two girls is fine, but too many and it ruins the story.

Nice, nice.
Some suggestions though:
I had a bit of a problem with how rushed this chapter was. Not fast paced, but you went from point a to point b way too fast. Try and slow it down an expand your chapters by describing the things around Izuku a bit more, that way it doesn't feel rushed, because while this was technically a good chapter, I felt little to no satisfaction reading it. You may also want to tweak some elements of his Quirk a bit, like giving him a base strength level of around Kirishima's level? That way he's not stabbing himself constantly, which was kinda cringey

I don't think a harem is the best way to go. I personally think some kind of love triangle type of ordeal, could spice things up a bit. Either way, this is your story and you do what ya want. This is looking to be a pretty interesting story, can't wait to see where it goes!

I would say make it only Jirou, that way how she affects him will be unique and special

This shit right here, is awesome.
I freaking love Izuku's personality and the feeling of Jotaro's.

I just realized every time he breaks his bones he can use an energy blast twice as powerful :O

Keep going!

yui

Thanks for the chapter!

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Izuku in this FanfictionIf you get killed, Walk it off"