The Aunt Pam mental image was quite endearing, and the generational Halpert-Schrute struggle is quite believable.

The dialogue was easier to follow this chapter, although there were still some paragraphs with more that one speaker, which isn't really ideal, so still room for improvement there.

Phillip seems pretty well put together and sharp, good saves like with Andy in the men's room.

The Jim bail on the head prank subplot will be interesting to see come to fruition, and I'm interested to see if Phillip will confide in someone his true purpose.

Looking forward to seeing where you go from here, keep it up!

It's an interesting premise and it's been a lot of fun to read. A note on the mechanics/grammar, it's nice to start a new paragraph whenever a different character is speaking - social distance them per say ;). Make it easier to read and follow the dialogue.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. It's not often we get to see this side of Dwangela, and the time travelling is just an added zaney bonus.