i quite liked the first chapter if it was anything to go by the rest are going to be great i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter also, thought it was sweet that you added the part about lilly's mom that was nice.

Great few chapters really enjoying it.

I love this story, I hope Mr Dastin and Flitwick meet up soon or something like that

Cheer's

Really great chapter. I like the mini time skip and the way you showed how much harry is progressing. I also like the way the teaching is being taught with the balance of self-discovery and direct theory. Really looking forward to snapes reaction to harry in the future. Also really interested in how the working life will shape harry. In cannon while clever he didnt seem to push himself unless it was volde related so it should be intersting to see how his work ethic and curiosity will be shaped by this. Also really like the way you showed how harry was enthusiastic in his apprach to making a potion and how having snape had damaged that curiosity. Also really like the world building and further character development of dustin with the dueling backstory. Looking forward to seeing more world building and for harry to learn more about thw wizarding world in general. Cant wait for the mext chapter.

nice chapter thx for writing it

Really interesting start. I love stories where the author has Harry do something different within the magical world.

This is an awesome beginning, thanks for sharing!

As soon as I read the blurb, I went to the story and as soon as I read the story I bookmarked it. It's interesting and seems fresh. But after the initial enthusiasm was over, I remembered a few warning bells that I ignored before, so I would like to make a few questions to know if I should anxious wait for the next chapters or discard it as an excelent start, but reading it further would only annoy me.
1 - Will you put Snape in a pedestal? Will he be the really good guy in your story, instead of the complex, admirable and unlikeable canon character?
2 - Will you put the Marauders as the bad ones? They were not saints, they acted wrong many times, but they also showed a fundamental goodness that is often forgotten in fanon, standing up for Remus, standing up against bigotry.
3 - Will you change values to make Malfoy & co the right ones? Even in canon, Lucius Malfoy was never punished as he should have, but how the character of the intery family is put in many fics is just revolting. Or it's bigotry is right or they weren't ever really bigots, the others are.
4 - Bashing in general. It's so lazy and annoying, I'm tired of it. You can criticize characters, whithout going to the bashing. In your story, a good example would be Harry questioning Ron why he didn't get a summer job when he complains about lack of money - valid criticism. Ron was receiving money from Dumbledore to be Harry's friend and wants to rob him, etc. - mindless bashing.

Really enjoy this and curious where you'll go with it.

Really intersting start. I rrally enjoyed your oc. There is a nice wacky personality to him. Intersted to see how this progresses.

Good

I enjoyed reading this chapter and hope you'll continue with this story.
Update soon