pues me parece muy bien desarrollada tu historia espero leer más en un futuro.

Welcome. First, my apologies for writing in English, but your English is probably far better than my Spanish.

As you're probably aware, the first FMP! light novel was published over 20 years ago, and the final one about a decade ago, and while the anime did undergo a revival (with Season 4 (Invisible Victory) coming over a decade after Season 3 (The Next Raid), even that only took the story half-way to its conclusion. As such most attention have long since moved on to other stories.

I am curious as to see how your story develops - it seems like it will make an interesting contrast to Tsaritza Mika's "Pieces of Yesterday" (another of those stories which I keep hoping will eventually be completed).