I don’t trust this Vlad guy.

Ooh just catching up now. Great chapter! I must admit, I swooned when Cas and Deana had their moment together. Of course, nothing can be easy for them, can it?

Awwww I LOVE spaceballs!
I'm so exciting...
he has his arm stretched behind her, she's leaning into him...
he likes her smile, his fingers are under her chin...
damn woman, the suspense and anticipation is going 100 miles an hour here!
I'm holding my breath!
YESSS!

Damn phone!

Why is Sam in such a pissy mood? Something seems to be bothering him...I wonder what it could be.

Oh Duma is such a bitch. I never liked her and she's just proven my point. Oh Cas, what are you up to and why have you come for Deana!?

Can't wait to see what will happen on their hiking date. More kissing, I bet and maybe more bonding, I hope.

YAY! So happy they finally kissed! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Dummah, the bitch. Someone should stab her in the face too (hint, hint.) Lol.
But poor Deana, she is so insecure now about Cas and the whole thing. I mean the odds are already against them with the clear age difference (not that she really knows how many eons he is older), and him being all that mysterious and especially with his brothers that keep calling him in the worst possible time. Sheesh. How are these two ever gonna end up together?
I can't wait for more.

Cassie is becoming my favorite character, besides Deana and Cas. I love how she is so invested in making Deana see that Castiel could be the perfect guy for her.

A space movie? Fingers are crossed it is either Spaceballs or Star Trek (major Star Trek nerd when it come to the original series here)

Anyway keep up the amazing work!

hahahahaha I'm right there with Cassie going "nooooooooooooooooooo why didn't you stay?"

Love the sock war - that was cute - such a normal sibling thing to do! Love their relationship!

Wonder what movie Cas got? and will there be popcorn and awkward silence again?

Awww, I miss the longer conversations. Adds more body to the story, but trying out descriptive text is a good thing...maybe you can combine the two and still make longer conversations?

Anyways, great chapter!

okay, i wasn't prepared for Cas to actually get dressed the old fashioned way...I kinda expected him to just snap his fingers...but okay, moving on...

hahahahahah giggling so much for Cas' lack of understanding movies. hahahahahaha LOVE it tho. His not understanding is very entertaining. Poor Deana must have grown hair on her teeth in 7 hours just to endure his innocence in all things Star Wars. Can't imagine how much he annoyed her with questions or comments during the movies :-D LOLOLOLOL

Awwww, no kiss :-( but aha, there was a kiss on the cheek. Bet Cas didn't see that one coming...

While I watched 5 of the 9 Star Wars movies, I'm not really a die-hard fan myself. I'm more into StarGate :-D

Oh jeez, that would be really creepy to find out that something supernatural is watching...whether it be angel or demon...getting all sorts of goosebumps now...could it be Cas watching over her or is it something else? Gosh! Is that why Cas is there? Has something come for Deana and Cas is here to protect her?

I love her conversation with Cassie. It's open and honest...only true friends
can be this cruel...calling her easy LOL

Love how the elastic band just comes loose and disappears...yip fixing hair with pencils! Us girls are awesome like that!

okay wait a minute now...where are the pens? WTF is going on?! Why is she not more freaked out?

Oh wow, striptease in the diner, huh - that's uhm...like hot! (biting lower lip), shit, now I'm getting hot. Crap. Okay okay... breathing deeply, letting out slowly... I see... necktie in hair..., staring deeply, captivating her with his deep blue eyes... ocean pools...drowning drowning...oh yeah, still reading...sorry for a moment I got lost there...moving on...

Wow, that's a good grownup answer - she's really very mature for her age. But spaced out over Castiel's breath in her neck...and his whispers in her ear...don't worry hun, I'm right there with ya!

Oh you're killing me with suspense...what, Deana had no dreams? No other zoned out episodes at home maybe? Dad, Sam noticing this? No? Okay.

Spidey Senses hahahahahahaha LOL

awwwwww, a movie date. Well, that is unexpectedly cute! Can't wait for more cuteness & fluff!

Poor Deanna, she doesn't know what to think, and she doesn't want to get her hopes up, but she is still excited about what is definitely a hot date. I know I am excited too.
I didn't really notice you use 'that' much dialogue for someone to have a need to point it out, but ok. Sometimes more dialogue and less description I better instead of having the characters to explain something, you can do it through narration.
And, dude. It still amazes me how similar tastes we have. I freaking love space balls!

“Of course I like hanging out with my sister, she has hot friends!” I give Sam points for truthfulness;). As for the Sambo thing? It’s West African for “Second Son,” or “Second Born.”
Love the family fluff, plus John’s concern for Deana.

I am the same when it comes to Star Wars. Always been a Star trek girl myself.
This was such an awesome chapter and damn you Michael for interrupting. They almost kissed damnit! Poor Cas, it is turning into something more then just an assignment for him, isn't it? Awe... Our little Cas is falling in love.
I want to see that kiss badly!

Great chapter! It was so cute! I bet Cas was going to tell Deana that since there was an age gap, he didn’t want to make her feel uncomfortable but that damn phone rang. I kinda want to hit Michael for that bad timing, lol. Keep up the awesome work!

That. Was. AWESOME!
So cute and fluffy and Deana is adorable, 'spacing out'.
I seriously can't wait to see their movie night. Alone. At his place. Aaaaaaaa

Super cute! I can’t wait to see their kinda/sorta “second date”! Keep up the amazing work!