I really enjoyed this story.

I like how you weave the original story into yours.

I hope Andrea does not sleep with Christian in this version of the story.

Time to ditch Nate and Stephen.

I like their budding friendship.

Interesting.

Absolutely brilliant! I loved this original and brilliant post. Thank you.

I loved this story. Because Miranda behaves like an adult, as does Andy. Other fics have them behaving like teenagers. If you have behaved a certain way for years you will not vary drastically from it, but you might gently bend a little bit every day. That’s what this seems like. Speaking as a fifty-odd year old.

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing.

Beautifully written, subtle story. Thank you for a delicious little read.