I loved this, it brings in so many different time threads, and is fascinating with the Viking Magi. Keep up your good work. I just want to say one other thing though.

There are moments I wish I could comment on a comment. That is vague foreshadowing.

Peace

Boring

Ok does this prologue actually mean something? Cause anything useful like names, vague foreshadowing are all really shitty and gives absolutely no indication whatsoever to be used ever again

Asphalt? On a wizard road, such as Knockturn Alley?
And woods nearby?
Diagon Alley and Knockturn Alley are in the middle of London...
How do they end up in the middle of the the woods and then at a manor?

Please i beg of you by all that is light dark or grey
Update please when you are ready but please not until you are happy with the next chapter

I am loving this story Vidar is a sass master
And i am eager to see where you take the plot
Please keep writing just be careful not to burn your self out

I have thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and like how you done Daphne’s little excerpt at the end

Please update soon

Oh I am loving this story and look forward to see where this story goes.

Good story. Especially these last two chapters. You’ve visibly gotten better. Keep it up bro.

great chapter please continue soon

I am excited for the sorting! I love how detailed your writing is and the life it brings. I am more in love with the plot you are developing!ω)/

Interesting tale here curious to see what you do with it.

I like this so far, but there's a few things here and there that are noticeable but not novel breaking. Things such as a few spelling and punctuation errors. You also refer to the characters too much by name. Some authors like to refer to a character by a characteristic, like, for example, Harry's green eyes or his black hair. Another is you have a lot of superfluous detail in your paragraphs, rather than the necessary details. Again, nothing too bad considering you're new to writing. Improvement comes with time and I really hope you stick with this story so we can see your progress.

Interesting. Awaiting more.