overall good. just try improving the spelling errors and please dedicate a little less time to foreplay.

I love it and I want also see Demon King Nobunaga and Ritsuka(Gudao) story

A really good one, just like all your works. How about the next one being with Altera?

Can you do Altera next?

Hehehehehehe once again Ritsuka charms an former enemy. Glad there wasn’t too much of a spoiler for LB 5.2... though the lack of information makes me both eager and dreadful of said Lostbelt.
Can’t wait to see how your future Fatefics end up Bro!
CHEERS COSMIC! \ . /
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A welcomed surprise considering the popularity of Caenis lately. Personaly I wish you made a Tomoe Gozen oneshot since she's one of my favorite Servants alonside Okita, Hippolyta, Shiki Ryougi, and Jeanne.

Really liked this one-shot I feel you got Caenis personality down both her arrogance and acceptance. Now that summer is here I wonder who the first servant will be next? Although now that you have done Caenis I can't help but wish you would do one with Pollux eventually as she is quite adorable and accepting of Ritsuka after being summoned. Trying to get around Castor would add some humor to the story.

Can't wait for the next servant one-shot.

Caenis is very well portrayed here, you write the characters all very good, nice lemon.

Another nice lemon between Ritsuka and Caenis. Erotic yet romantic and beautifully written. And yep, Penthesilia should have a lemon story.

Can't wait for this year's summer series.

Keep it up, and stay safe.

Almost thought there might be a flashback of Poseidon forcing himself on her. Glad that wasn't the case.

Thought Caenis would be more aggressive but this is still good. Sad there wasn't a paizuri scene though.

I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS

EXPECTATIONS EXCEEDED

Man, so glad to see you in my notifications again. Hope you're doing alright over there; it's nuts outside.

That's said... I'm sad to to report that there are still some mistakes and typos and stuff, but they're fewer than before; you're getting better, man. That's rad.

This fanfiction reminds me of something I keep forgetting; are all the heights of the servants you've been using accurate to the game?

I imagine Caenis being taller than either Gudas and nothing can't change that, but some of the sprites are old and sometimes whack. Apparently, Ushiwakamaru is as tall as Scatach.

I'm dead serious. Also you gonna write a story with Ushi one day? Would also be fun to see your write Penthesilia and Jing Ke.

Anyways, this has been another excellent fanfic. You stay safe and healthy too, man.

FUCK YEAH!