Reviews for Faust: The Horseman Gamer
bimboom chapter 3 . 7/30
i realy like your story hope to see more
dylansandy1993 chapter 1 . 7/21
the horse and sword have names, if one were to use Darksiders as the inspiration for the horsemen.

It's actually a franchise I really like and expected to see in this fic. So far, I'm actually curious to see where things go except for the lack of a name for the sword and horse seems odd. I think it was Ruin and chaos? They might be called something different but each horseman has a poetic complementary name for their stuff.
Crywolfseven chapter 3 . 7/20
Ok I am really enjoying this story, it’s nice to see a gamer fic where the MC isn’t given the “Sociopath” flaw or already a truly evil person. Not that I dislike those stories per say it’s just nice to have a breath of fresh air from time to time. I am very much looking forward to seeing where you go from here and happy I gave it a chance even though I never read or watched to Kill La kill manga or anime. I was thinking I would be lost without that but you did very well making it so the reader understands what is going on in the world.

Now one thing I think you should consider editing is the “last Stand” perk. The way you worded it makes the MC litterally immortal. By that I mean you state that once his health drops to zero it will bounce back up to 40% and regenerate very quickly. However there is no listed cooldown to this perk. So basically as it stands now he could stand at the ground zero of a nucleus blast and every time his health drops to zero it would just automatically jump back up over and over. I doubt that was your goal as it would severely limit any potential conflicts if the MC has litterally no chance of dying. I mean sure the MCs always have plot armor and we know they are very likely to survive but still there is always that chance that they won’t. Might I suggest changing the perk to a once a week or once a day thing at best? I mean the MC already has like 9 million plus health that’s unlikely to hit zero very often but the perk is just to insanely broken as it is to have been received at such a low stat level. I mean had it been reached at like 10,000 END I could see true immortality but it wasn’t so it sets a strange value when compared to other similar stat level perks.
hughfj08 chapter 3 . 7/17
Yeah. These numbers are just so beyond what I can scale that I just don't care anymore.
All I see is endgame boss at the spawn point of new characters spawn point.
Not even the decency to wait at first village.

I mean c'mon, 10million health? What is that even supposed to mean. All it means is having to write shit like "1,000,000dmg dealt" its just so ridiculously high. Just scale the numbers back on everything rather than this nonsense.
When everyone has 10million HP, and deals damage in the hundreds of thousands they really all have 1,000HP and deal damage in the tens.

It's weird, they are just numbers but just looking at them actively puts me off this story.
Saying that, I am out.
hughfj08 chapter 1 . 7/17
...I am unsure how to feel about this one. Those numbers are so crazy high that I don't feel like they actually have any actual value anymore.
OP gamer I don't mind, but it is nice when the numbers, at least to start, grow within a recognisable range so that when they hit OP its more understandable on 'how' OP they are.

Cause all you have given is civilian 1-15, low bandit 10-30 but then immediately hit us with stats in the 700-1000 range. It throws any sense of scale completely out the window. If civvies are around the 10 stat mark and I waltz in with 900STR, based on the information I have on hand, I would expect a flick of my finger to disintegrate them with impact force alone unless stat numbers mean vastly little compared to usual game number values.
Is say 100 here like 2 points in a standardised game?
Thanos69 chapter 1 . 7/13
Love the story but don't bring God(just saying) into this, Isekai doesn't exist. And fuck Satan.
M2R chapter 3 . 7/10
quite interesting but i suppose there won't be any challenge for him?
Nicolas Moreno chapter 3 . 7/10
Me encanto.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 2 . 7/10
There's no tension in the story.; everything is too easy for the protagonist. Maybe I'm judging too early, but there's been a ridiculous amount of plot device so far. Even the Game system itself is actively helping the protagonist.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 1 . 7/10
Neutral is the worst alignment to be, it's just a sign of indecisiveness more than anything. After all, neutral characters are just 'good' characters whom pretend to be dark.
Blazing heart frigid soul chapter 3 . 7/9
Well I'm curious how much int-wistdom stylish has given him.
Nayrcon chapter 3 . 7/9
thanks for the chapter, love your work as always.
this was an awesome chapter for getting so much power~
im looking forward to seeing some more familiar characters.
thanks for the hard work and until next time~
Evmeister chapter 3 . 7/8
Thanks for the chap, chum!
IMxTHExMANIAC chapter 3 . 7/8
While some people may dislike Fics’ like this for one reason or another, I can’t help but be a degenerate and like them anyway. Keep it up!
IMxTHExMANIAC chapter 2 . 7/8
The eye ball popping out of his socket was kinda funny. Would’ve been belly-achingly funny if his HP was dropped by 360 when he pulled up his stats.

(25k health per 5 seconds though...)
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