what?

you can just throw away endeavors redemption arc like that?

the hell is this?

you didnt even show how he changed. or what happened to him to to cause such change. you're rushing to much and replacing it with filler chapters.
not even mentioning the power scaling.

you made shinso and asshole then casted him aside. i know its your fic and you can do what you want. but i havent seen a single character development in this fic.

i can tell that your only focus is to make izuku look good and his harem. shoko change immediately that i thought i skipped a chapter.

izuku is still the same kid as before. still self-loathing, awkward, shy boy, then the next scene he's a hot, cool, charismatic guy that can beat anyone, then he comes back from being a shy kid. character development is very important in a story.

this story has potential and still enjoyable when you ignore the holes. but i hope you improve your writing for coming chapters. sorry for the rant. i want to see this fic improve.

the nomu's wounds should have been cauterized, and shoould have prevented its regeneration.

call him dekiru then not deku

i hope izuku doesnt just punch things.

okay you dont own anyones turst in just one day.

Nice job with all the battles.

Keep the good writing.

Excellent update thank you

It took me until chapter 4 to realize that I had read the starting chapter and forgot to follow.

Overall, 6/10, don't worry that's pretty good, I'm just strict on my ratings. The biggest problem is you're going too fast and it's kinda hard to keep up. Slow down, give more details to a given situation, and you should be golden.

Also maybe a bit too fast for crushes to form, just my nitpicky opinion though

So far, interesting Idea, but so far it's more of a glossing over of what's happening, you aren't giving the reader many details to chew on and think about. Also, the shifting between days and months is for fast and unexpected I have to look back to make sure there really was a skip in time. Try to figure out how to move forward in time without being too subtle while not doing "Time Skip: 4 Days Later"

RE-DEMP-TION REDEMPTION RE-DEMP TION RE DEMP TION!

I already want to see Midoriya break it to pieces

Calling BS if all it took to win was to destroy both its heart and brain at the same time it would die then the first incinerate would have instantly killed not to mention the burn should have cauterized the skin Incinerate one shot this thing and the rest of there fight never should have happened. It is shown cauterizing skin is a way to stop a nnomu's regeneration when freaking endeavor did it so the whole nomu fight pass the first incinerate never should have happened.

Hey!
I just met you~
And this is crazy~
But I suddenly trust you~ (since you're a cute girl)
So here's a secret that could shatter society as we know it. -_-"
I get that's Anime/Manga/Novel logic, but come on. We, both readers and writers, know the world of My Hero Academia and its characters one way or another. However, in your story, Izuku and All Might still don't know her. In All Might's case, only a handful know out of necessity. Is Izuku going around telling every girl he likes after meeting her once?