Ah, glad to see this boss here. This one scared the absolute hell out of me.

Really loving the changes here. The character meetings and everything were like if they'd actually met in game, keep it up!

There's more to read and I'm slowly reading my way through but I've been enjoying this! Especially the Claire and Ada part this chapter. I did catch that Simmons called Carla by her real name instead of calling her Ada at the beginning of chapter 5. I'll definitely be reading on anyway.

I love the ending. Too bad it always comes to an end, I was thinking that could go both ways, when Claire says she asked about her real name and she told him Ada had said she forgot, well Claire could have said it to keep Ada's secret because we all know Ada told her when they were in private .

Look at that Leon is finally moving on with his life I hope Ada knows what family she's getting into, Leon father to Sherry, Claire mother to Sherry and Natalia and Barry grandad to Natalia. Ada step mother to Sherry or (Sgerry) as my iPad wants to put soon I'll be able to have my own characters. (Nick, Sgerry and Gelena) I'm guessing she's got that one to pick up from Barry's later as well youngest of the two.)

I didn't realise Jill had kids, she's going to have to split Chris and Piers up. No that's it Chris father, Jill mother Piers son.
At least now Jill is free to date Claire.

Now back to my review, brilliant ending, who would have thought it CarlaxHelena (Gelena) I know you put it in the summary about them two but reading it. They are so adorable together. Now I'll have to move onto to ao3.

Just read the end. Was wholesome as hell buddy. :)
Can't wait to see what you're going to do next.

And it finally comes to an end. I liked some parts better than the actual game, although I would have preferred Leon getting together with Claire instead of Ada. I just find the Ada/Leon pairing to be a very toxic relationship. A couple of spelling and grammatical errors here such as "balled" as opposed to "bawled", plus I think more description could be used when you mentioned Ada smiling at Leon's expression. Aside from that, good story.

Some grammatical errors here and there. I think one section could use a line break. Aside from that, looks good.

No reply to my review. I've enjoyed this journey, I think it's the first story I've managed to read from beginning to end and it is sad to see it end. I do hope you find mine as interesting and stay until the end. I am hoping for an ending telling me what happens to everyone after this.

A brilliant end to a super story I was going to say that, wait while Claire finds out. Jill survived Reccoon City, she can survive anything even a boyfriend that's no more. Loved that you kept the picture of a young man in it.

I think I get where Carla's going with the cocoon. At least this way gives you a little more understanding of Carla's personality or what would have been seen as they like to bring people into it but can't be bothered to give a little personality. Nice job I, still hooked till the end.

Good chapter. A couple of errors. I really thought somebody would have commented on Simmons' turning into a dinosaur.

I'm hoping I'm liking where your going with this. Poor Piers but maybe it'll be better to lose an arm than his life. That doesn't surprise me, Sherry probably hasn't seen as much stuff as her mum, dad, aunt and uncle. Try and guess who I'm talking about. Can't wait to see how it ends. Hopefully not yet

I have to say, this is getting really interesting. Looking good so far. I like the little changes so far.

Poor Sherry she sounds like she's in shock.

Yeah it's Helena, Leon and Jill's job, screaming down the streets about Simmons. My iPad wanted to put Gelena.

Take these two into custody, I know you don't like the remake but at least she has experience in arresting people. When she aressted Claire 15 years ago. Can't take the credit got it from my sis.

That's the problem once you've had your revenge a lot of people don't think beyond that point.

Mind fiddling me in

I can actually imagine this as a film Sherry running around trying avoid that chainsaw freak and then seeing people shooting at them. Wow there is never a dull moment with Sherry. No wonder Claire stays with her.

Who's personal desire I wonder? Jill's?

I wonder if Jill will catch back up with Helena and Leon or if she'll end up finding Chris and Piers.

Let's hope stress isn't getting to Piers seeing that woman again that was supposed to be dead.

Alright, read the new chapter and didn't enjoy giving Simms the aircraft carrier: his only reason to fuck over Tall Oaks and kill the president was the preservation and stability of the USA. Him, trying to destroy the world with missiles sound out-of-character.
I understand what you were trying to do but, putting the plot point of the aircraft carrier and the destruction of the world in the story because in-canon, it WAS in the story is understandable.
But, it just causes massive plothole and massive character revision for Simmons, which makes him sound out-of-character.

But I enjoyed the character interactions between the 2 trios (Claire/JakeSherry and Jill/Leon/Helena) and the interactions of both Ada and Carla.
It was fun for both of them.