Good work on the overall narrative and the character’s personality. This is a great story.

hey, this is a cool story. keep up the good work

Cool story

Overall this is very good lovely story you made. Hope to see more of your work.

this is well made for first time writing a fanfic, good job and hope the best if write more

Very nice. I actually respect all RWBY pairings (no hatred or bashing here unless they're real gross or incesty or something), but there are some I enjoy reading and seeing work about more than others and Dragon Slayer is definitely in the top 10 (maybe number 8 or 9.) The idea of the dorky, noodley guy and the literally and figuratively hot girl who should be WAY out of his league falling in love just touches my heart .

Can't wait to see more of this. This ought to be good with Jaime meeting Two . That's the beauty of AUs like this: you can do whatever you want with characters, events, pairings, etc., and nobody can really argue or complain about you likeing something else or not following canon because it doesn't actually AFFECT canon.

Nice, I'm looking forward to both things

I really want to see this continue

Really nice you made, hope to see more work from you.

Very good story.

Exceptional for a first time writer!
Also CH.2: meet Taiyang. Pun wars

I definitely enjoyed this story and would like to see how meeting the parents goes for both sides

Good story.

Please release the second chapter.

looking forward to a sequel