Reviews for The Surge of the Oncoming Storm
savethemadscientist chapter 6 . 7/10
Another great chapter, I especially liked Martha defending herself against Shakespeare, it was awesome. This is the first story I've read where she does that. It was also nice that Aneres scolded the Doctor for how he was treating Martha. I like the bond that is forming between Martha and Aneres. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
NicoleR85 chapter 6 . 7/9
Another great chapter. That was one of the things that annoyed me about part of this season. I am glad that you wrote how Martha stood up for herself. I can't wait till we get to the Human Nature/Family of Blood episodes. I can't wait to read the next part.
SerenityMoonlight chapter 6 . 7/8
I love this series so much, so well written. I'm so glad you did the parts with Martha and Aneres scolding Shakespeare and the Doctor. I remember watching those scenes again when I gained a better appreciation for Martha and they made me so mad. Once again great chapter.
savethemadscientist chapter 5 . 7/7
Another great chapter. Aneres really didn't like the Doctor kissing Martha on the lips but at least in the end Martha understood that it didn't mean anything and the Doctor apologized to Aneres for it. Good on Martha for holding the Doctor back from attacking the Plasmavore. I'm excited to see the relationship between Martha, Aneres and the Doctor develop. Having the chapters pre written explains how you were able to upload them so fast and also makes sense as you're starting college soon. Don't worry if you can't update as often due to classes, the readers understand that your education is important to you. I wish you the best when you start college and will patiently wait for the next update.
geogirl2014 chapter 4 . 7/7
So happy to find this sequel and to bindge it all as soon as possible! Can't wait to see more fun times with Martha. Have you thought about how you're going to handle Human Nature and Family of Blood?
NicoleR85 chapter 5 . 7/7
Another great chapter. I am glad that you were trying to get ahead before you went to college. I understand how time consuming college is so update when you can. I can't wait to read the next episode.
savethemadscientist chapter 4 . 7/6
If I didn't know any better I would think that Aneres is feeling broody after holding the baby early in the chapter. I completely agree with you about Martha and am looking forward to how things change without her pining after the Doctor. Also wishing you the best for when you move to college in the future. Looking forward to when you update again.
NicoleR85 chapter 4 . 7/6
Another great chapter. I admit I was a little annoyed about that but I like Martha over Rose due to the fact that Martha is more mature than Rose and didn't let her crush get in the way and chose her family over the Doctor. I can't wait to read the next part. Please update soon.
savethemadscientist chapter 3 . 7/6
The flashback scenes were really well written and enjoyable to read. Especially the one where they discovered they were tethers.
savethemadscientist chapter 2 . 7/6
I love Donna's nickname for Aneres, it's really sweet and definitely fits her. I have to admit I wasn't expecting the second chapter so soon.
HannahHPandDWfanJones chapter 2 . 7/6
Oooh beautiful! Love Sunshine moment. Also Doctors protectiveness. Really looking forward to seeing series 3 with Aneres (has my favourite episodes in(with master)) but now so excited for series 4 and the amazing Donna with them. Thank you for the update and allons-y for now
NicoleR85 chapter 3 . 7/6
Another great chapter. I loved that little look at how they met. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon.
NicoleR85 chapter 2 . 7/5
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read how Martha will react to the Doctor and Aneres. Please update soon.
HannahHPandDWfanJones chapter 1 . 7/4
Fantastic, I adore this fic and was waiting with bated breath for this new story. Loved the throwing out the door bit. Thank you so much for sharing this and allons-y for now
savethemadscientist chapter 1 . 7/3
First chapter in the second book and I'm already hooked. I love the kindness that Aneres has shown Donna so far. I am looking forward to when Martha joining them. I'm also looking forward to any original adventures you write and changes you make to the canon adventures. I love hugs and am sending one back to you. Looking forward to more.
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