| Reviews for the Great Eclipse Dragon |
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   MalTheDragonQueen chapter 3 . 7/3 I'm rading this and its pretty okay so far whre Iam at it now. however A: this freaken kid has NO consideration for throwing off timelines, though you did have him note the multi-verse thing so that's fine. and B you might wanna run your stuff through Grammerly or something. there are a lot of mistakes that are quite obvious from the start. beyond that I'm enjoying this. though please do tell, why is Hiro's hair white iand red instead of a mix of Issei's brown and Rias' red?and why does he have a golden eye? |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/29 Nicely done. |
| fortinpatric chapter 8 . 6/27 Merci pour le chapitre, toujours un plaisir pour la lecture. |
| fortinpatric chapter 7 . 6/27 Merci pour le chapitre |
| leader.dbz chapter 7 . 6/27 Use a silence spell |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/24 Nice new chapter. Please let the next one have them talk about issei's trauma with raynare that way the girls will understand his reluctance/disbelief of hiro being his kid. |
| fortinpatric chapter 6 . 6/25 Merci pour le chapitre |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/21 Thank you for the new chapter. Can't wait for the next one. |
| rama alif chapter 5 . 6/22 I want see Issei reaction when he know that Issei and rias is married |
| fortinpatric chapter 5 . 6/21 Merci pour le chapitre |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/18 Nicely done. |
| fortinpatric chapter 1 . 6/18 Merci pour le chapitre |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/15 Can't wait for another chapter. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/13 Hope hiro's appearance will make issei realize rias' feelings for him sooner, and rias will finally understand how the trauma of raynare's betrayal to issei was holding himback. That being said grt chapter, hope the next one comes out soon. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/13 Sweet. |
