Reviews for Tormentous II: It's not over
Cubit2 chapter 15 . 7/28
Nice story. Steve would definitely be able to convince him that leaving his children was not a good idea, not even to protect them. I like the parallel with Steve's father shipping his kids off to protect them and then none of them were happy. Well done.
Cubit2 chapter 14 . 7/28
You were right. A tie conversation was definitely essential. Very cute. Loved the key toss, too.
Cubit2 chapter 12 . 7/28
Lou does have a knack for just the right word at just the right time. hehehehehe Nicely done.
Cubit2 chapter 10 . 7/28
I've been reading straight through and not stopping to review (because I really should be in bed already) but you asked so nicely for a review that I just have to. I really liked the use of the "flashbacks". It not only gives a little history of Danny but it also shows all that he has to live for. Plus, it was a nice walk down memory lane of the show.
Msdib chapter 15 . 7/24
Thanks for the great story! And don’t ever apologize for giving more chapters- that is a good thing!
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 15 . 7/24
Good Danny got his memory back. All it took was something to shock him in a way. And of course Danny your kids wouldn't be better off with out you. Listen to Steve he is right. Staying is the right thing to do.
SteveFan81 chapter 15 . 7/23
Great last chapter. I can understand why Danny was so emotionally upset that he felt leaving everyone would keep them safer. Thank goodness Steve could talk him down. So sweet Danny’s first concerns were Steve, and then his children. Thank you for this story. Hope to see another one from you soon.
Marian Simonetti chapter 15 . 7/23
I loved your story...I have to go back
and read it again now that it's complete...Please keep up your amazing writing...KUDOS
Andrea Wells chapter 15 . 7/23
Loved Steve begging Danny to stay. Great ending. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/23
You did good. It was fun reading this story
jaden998 chapter 15 . 7/23
That was great! Good ending too!
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 14 . 7/20
Lol the new Danny working the smart table perfectly fine. Maybes the old Danny was just playing so someone use would do that work. I hope these head ach that Danny was getting mean he is getting his memory back, He probably just needed time and something to trigger them.
Marian Simonetti chapter 14 . 7/20
Enjoying your story...can't wait for next..final? chapter...
Well done...
Andrea Wells chapter 14 . 7/20
Awesome an extra chapter. Excellent update
SteveFan81 chapter 14 . 7/19
Loved this chapter. It was interesting that Danny tossed the keys to Steve to drive his Camaro without Steve acknowledging that memory. I can understand Steve’s concern about letting Danny in the field. It sounds like memories are flooding back - and their are so many horrible ones...painful ones. I would think intense headaches could be normal after the severity of head injury that Danny had. I can’t imagine coping with all the painful and horrific images and memories, and trying to make sense of them. Great chapter. I don’t want this story to end!
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