Reviews for Digging Yourself a Hole
pickaxe881978 chapter 1 . 6/11
Okay, this was damn good. It's nice to see Sam admit that she liked Galaxy Wars (I thought as much anyway, lol). This reminds of the saying "The lady doth protest too much, methinks," I had a pretty good idea that's what was going to happen when I read "No, I'm going!" she quickly cut him off. I can so see Freddie storing his Galaxy Wars DVD's in order and taking notice if they were out of order (sounds like me with Star Trek). I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 6/11
Well the movie must have been good for Freddie but the little talk he had with Sam after the film was probably even better, nicely done! Heh heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Benny V. in Seattle chapter 1 . 6/11
Sorry, this is gonna be critical, I hope in a constructive manner, though.

A cute idea, but I think your first instinct to make it an incident in a longer story might have been correct. Or even just a dialogue exchange.

It's too slight to support being a story on it's own (says the guy who's written stories that are only Sam listening to a song or Freddie writing a letter...).

And the dialogue feels off here to me, not a problem I usually have with your stories. Maybe its because, as you said, you wrote this quickly; a dialogue polish might've helped the lines "sound" more natural coming out of Seddie.

You know I'm a fan of your stories but I feel like this time, you could've done better.

BTW a new chapter of my current in-progress Victorious fic is going up tomorrow; I'll understand if you want to shred it.
JCarrasco chapter 1 . 6/11
Keep it up I love this story please.