| Reviews for Shinobi At Sea |
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   NaruCrazy chapter 2 . 1h I dont mind a chapter being 100k words, provided its not an issue for the writer. |
| surya25addanki chapter 2 . 3h Nice |
| IlluminHeaven chapter 2 . 8/1 You are now my favorite author. Omg your write his personality so well. I’m going into shock send help. Pls. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/28 Here's chapter two, otherwise known as Naruto spills his story and lots of his abilities because people demand it. Mind you these are people he got recommended to join when Naruto could have done just as well on his own. It doesn't really make sense that Naruto's willing to eliminate one person and have his arm twisted by another. It's dumb and it makes Naruto look dumb. |
| Blazen91 chapter 2 . 7/27 Couldn't Naruto use his chakra to pull those slave collars off? Surround it and then yank it off similar to how Rayleigh did. I'm also confused as to why Naruto passed out randomly in the first chapter? It was odd. |
| Zerak chapter 2 . 7/25 You should him keep summoning the toads, you can make it so he can’t use them to go back home as the dimension that the toads life in can only be exited in the same world you entered from. You can make it so later he figures out how to summon them by adjusting the jutsu to the alignment of the stars and make it so he is just on a different planet. This way he can still summon toads. And if you want he can even send messages home. |
| pikapikachu4291 chapter 1 . 7/23 make naruto op |
| Dr1zzy chapter 2 . 7/20 Good story |
| otakusage chapter 2 . 7/19 great story. are you still writing? |
| 00phantom chapter 2 . 7/18 Man i am loving your stories man I can’t wait to read your next updates |
| 808Joker808 chapter 2 . 7/18 I'll be looking forward to his meeting with the nobles, but more importantly his fight with Kizaru. |
| 808Joker808 chapter 1 . 7/18 Interesting start. |
| aGnamZer0 chapter 2 . 7/15 Like What is Lost, it was an incredible start! This time, for the exact opposite reason as WIL. I like how he was already integrated in the world and infamous before he met the Straw Hat Pirates. I like that despite his god like powers, Naruto continues to be humble and help those in the needs, or at least kids – he wouldn't manage if he also went and help every person. Despite his kindness, he knows to be merciless and kill, for sometimes letting his enemies live could endanger not only himself, but also his love ones or other innocent people. About the harem, well I already told you what I thought of harems in WIL, but I also said that if they were well made then I didn't mind them, I even enjoyed a few. For the members, I do not have any problem with Nami and Robin, but less pleased with Carrot. Since I have a so good momentum, I'm going to comment the chapter two of New God in Town and read Shattered. I'm so happy you posted so much Post War Naruto crossovers! |
| Schey-Drin Abusaman chapter 2 . 7/15 do not make it a harem ... thats all. |
| Jaeger-Maester-97 chapter 1 . 7/14 yo, seeing as naruto is aleeady a Six Parhs Sage bave him join Luffy at Marineford and take out the big guns IE Akinu and Blackbeard pirates like the dogs they are. you can have Naruto use his Lava Style to combat Akainu and shock the shit out of him and then kill rhe Blackbeard Pirates as they are bunch of black souled fuckers |
