Ehh... done.

I want to like it... but it seems like you had a lot of thoughts and tried to squish them together while not really focusing on any of them, why is Danzo still an asshole and beating children but Hiashi calls him 'Sama' and reports to him, why do you make Hiashi and his wife seem like good people in that regard, why did you have Hitomi say something so... cringe as to think of her daughter as a 'sicko' and then proceed to do the same thing... just odd.

Good first chapter, excellently done.

That's not realistic at all. If Naruto is seven, I'll take it Hinata is too, and if so even if she was very advanced for her age, she definitely can't think of a boy in that way. That's absurd!

Why does it have always to be NaruHina? I just can't bear this pairing anymore. But for the sake of Shisui and Itachi, I'll put up with it.

Don't you love how these fics go out of their way to just be shit right off the bat? All because the author can't show any fucking restraint?

Mind as sharp as a high level anbu agent at age 2. I mean, bullshit on levels that I can't even begin to describe. A 2 year old's brain isn't even developed enough for that.

He utilizes Mokuton. Cool...

Among other Kekkei genkai. Annnnd straight back into the shit.

You act all sly with those “consecutive normal punches”

It is a bit unrealistic for a 12-year-old to say “I love you” to a girlfriend, which is also strange to have for someone so young.

this chapter was a bunch of mixed up text and code. plz fix it asap. I don't want to read it like this

ok soooooo I may have binged read this fic soooo hurry up an get a new chapter out lol.

Why did you change it from Cloud to Stone ninja?

Welp, somewhere in the middle of the chapter, things got weird.
It was barely understandable whatever the flying fuck was even happening.

I'd say, maybe my attention span was too weak? Or, it really was bad writing or rather, sentence structuring. But I'd rather say it was my fault. Take from this what you want.

Please for the love of all that is good, keep writing this absolutely incredible story.

Chapter 7 and Chapter 9 have formatting issues just an fyi. Great story btw.