Wow! Good start! It just sucked me in! I always thought Dumbledore as a dark lord. but most people don't go that route. I am looking forward to reading the rest!

interesting and amazing start, I'm liking the story so far. can't wait for the next chapter.

I think you are doing remarkably well for someone who's not a native English speaker! Well done!

And I am very much enjoying the story.

Oh my... I like it so far...