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I should heartedly agree. I just cannot get it that she wouldn't have told Tony.

good fit so far

This was amazing. I loved the trip down the memory lane. I really loved this. The scene with Schmeil was beautiful. The last two scenes were heartbreaking. I'm glad you are going AU, I too can't fathom that Ziva would keep a child a secret from Tony.

Wonderful chapter. Thank you for still writing Tiva

Yes, please tell Tony. Do not follow the show.

I absolutely love this story. You write these two so well together. Look forward to the next chapter. There's still a lot of Tiva fans out here. I also never agreed that Ziva wouldn't tell Tony about Tali

I'm really enjoying this. Love the way you write them

okay this fic was a breath of fresh air! Been a while since I read new good fic on here. I look forward to the second chapter!

oh my goooood ! i'm so happy you're still writing and what a treat to share this with us thank you so much for your writing, for keeping these characters alive i really enjoyed this story and can't wait for more thanks for the time and effort you put into this !
k bye i wish you the best !

This was beautiful. You've really captured their dialogue, and how they are with each other. I enjoy the little things you weaved through this, like Tony's apartment being his sanctuary. I can't wait for part two.

Nice snippets of everyday life-