| Reviews for Long Way From Home |
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BlueWater5 chapter 8 . 7/29 I like how Severus is adapting to caring for two more people. Any chance of seeing how the students and staff are reacting to the additional guests? |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/29 Complimenti, non vedo l'ora di sapere cosa accadrà . |
Kawisdom chapter 8 . 7/29 Lottie's comment about playing dumb not being intelligent was definitely something Snape would say. Severus is being seduced by the concept of a family very quickly. He's already working to ensure that Ren is treated equally to his sister (and won't both their hearts break when she goes home, even though she'll be ecstatic to see her family). Severus is already contemplating missing Ren and possibly Edie as well. He'll soon be looking into reasons for them to stay close by instead of returning to Knockturn Alley, even when Lottie is gone. |
SavvySpirit chapter 5 . 7/23 Aww...Sev is finally warming up. Amazing so far. Keep writing! |
BlueWater5 chapter 7 . 7/22 I like how Edie wanted to make sure Lottie was being treated right. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/22 Complimenti, bellissimo capitolo. Non vedo l'ora di vedere la reazione quando i due fratelli si incontreranno . |
Kawisdom chapter 7 . 7/22 It'll be hard when Lottie goes home, won't it? Severus already cares enough to miss her, but now Edie and Ren will, too. I admit, I'm having doubts that he'll let those two return to their old life. They've had one meal together and he's already going beyond the original agreement to pay for Ren's schooling when he's older. The nosy students will have more fodder for gossip than ever as they watch their intimidating Potions Master with his newly acquired family (while he pretends that's not what they are). You realize, of course, that I'm voting once again for an AU? Give Severus and Edie a happy ending this time! Pretty please? |
CassiopeiaNazyalensky chapter 5 . 7/20 I'm in the process of writing my own Severus/OC and I wanted to tell you that your work inspires me to never give up, even when my writing's off or I just can't get something to work. I really enjoyed reading this chapter 3 |
CassiopeiaNazyalensky chapter 6 . 7/20 Thank you so much for writing these stories and never giving up on them. They're really underrated, and I hope more people find them and experience the magic! |
ThePhoenixandtheDragon chapter 6 . 7/17 I am glad that the little boy will be helped too. |
BlueWater5 chapter 6 . 7/15 Nicely written description of life in Knockturn Alley. Looking forward to seeing Lottie's reaction to Edei and Ren. I'm glad Severus will be watching out for Ren. |
Kawisdom chapter 6 . 7/15 Edie seems at heart the same. A little harder, maybe, but so has her life been. How will she and Severus get along over time? He didn't even blink at taking on responsibility for her son. He calls it manipulation to achieve his goal, but Ren is one child who won't be missing an education. I wonder what Lottie will make of having a brother? |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/14 Complimenti, immaginavo che potesse avere un bambino. Spero che grazie a Lottie Severus possa avere una famiglia che si occupi di lui come lui si occuperà di loro. |
BlueWater5 chapter 5 . 7/8 Great update! You nicely portrayed Lottie's confusion and then understanding of the Bones family. The flying is bittersweet ... |
Kawisdom chapter 5 . 7/8 He's going to hate giving her back to her family. |