Hmmm . . . I think you would have been better off putting at the very least Katsumi and Itsuka in different zones from each other and Izuku, Kaen, Kars, and Scythe. They separated people who were from the same schools in cannon in order to keep people who knew eachother from working together. Following that logic, with All Might knowing Izuku is friends with them, there's no way they should have been in the same zone. Heck, it would have even made sense for all six to be in different zones. Because then there isn't a shortage of points to go around. It slightly strains credulity that Kars and Izuku would get over 80 points each, and both Kasumi and Itsuka could have 60 all within the same battle zone, and still have enough for the rest of the participants you showed to get enough to get in.

To put it into perspective for you, just for those four alone to get that many points they would need to take out 98 Three Pointers. It's just not very realistic, because in all likelihood at least half their scores came from One Pointers and Two Pointers. That means there would need to be possibly as many as 1000 robots in that one zone. But if you have only one high score in each zone it leaves room for other contestants to get reasonable scores without a ridiculous amount of robots in one zone.

will you be giving Izuku the Rokushiki? I think that those techniques would be good additions to his arsenal for his hero work

Rising of the Shield Hero and Fire Emblem Three Houses crossover

Damn, that is so cool, and how it all played out was simply amazing. The teamups were perfect, Monoma got dissed by his own team, and classmates, and Minori decided it would be best to pour salt into the wound.

I’m not the biggest fan of the Calvary battle myself but what you did here was great ESPECIALLY what happened to Monoma and the brothers forming their own teams and Shoko teaming up with one of them
SCARECROW is in Rei’s hospital? Oh this will not end well!

One thing that annoys me about people like Shiozaki is that they claim that Christianity is about spreading "peace" and "love" when their is lots of evidence otherwise. The Crusades and the Witch Burnings not to mention what happened to Jeanne D'Arc. It was even used as an excuse for WW2. I'd LOVE if someone called out that person for blatantly lying to their face. I love the fact that Yui Kodai is in 1-A. One thing about Canon that always confused me was how the Classes were divided up. If it was based on Points then their is no way that Tooru and Mineta would have made it in to 1-A. Did they just pick and choose between the teachers?

After reading so many fics with the Quirk Assessment Test, It is nice to see ones where people blow Aizawa's expectations out of the water. Considering the sheer amount of OP Characters that exist in Anime, Manga, Web Novels, Light Novels, Video Games, etc... it is nice to see some of them. An example of OP not being done is a FemNaruto who accidentally absorbed All of Her entire World's Chakra and Knowledge of everything before being de-aged and dropped into MHA or Overlord a few years before Canon. Their is only Two fics that I am aware of that gives a Female Character Kaguya's Rinne-Sharingan which is annoying considering how useful it looks.

Okay, that is an awesome. The race was pretty cool, and the way Stain and Magane were introduced, was pretty cool.

This series seems like it was MADE to crossover with the Fate Series. I could easily see a Reincarnated Heroic Spirit using their Noble Phantasm on that 0 Pointer. It also doesn't help that I am listening to Tamamo's Extella theme while reading this because of the Japanese vibes it gives off.

Itsuka's quirk has a pretty nasty downside. Imagine if a Villain were to capture her and chop off her Hands. She'd be Quirkless then. Quirk's that rely entirely on specific body parts don't seem that helpful seeing as anyone with any brains could counter them unless said body part is internal and requires medical knowledge to be aware of and counter it. An example being Katsuki's sweat glands which would require you having Medical knowledge in order to damage them. Considering some of Canon Class 1-A and 1-B have Quirks that can be rendered permanently useless by a Bladed Weapon, I wonder if it was deliberate choice on the Author of My Hero Academia's part to give the Hero Killer Stain Bladed Weapons? If Stain returns in Canon and lops of the body part of a single student that allows them to use their Quirk then I wouldn't be surprised. Aizawa is lucky that he hasn't had to face Ninja Villains who use Flash Bangs on him.

Ewww you kept that disgusting costume for izuku why that's embarrassing

I love it. Can't wait for when Eri is saved, and I am extremely excited to see more.
I love how Midoriya was being courteous and spoke in a way that would encourage the others.
I still hate Monoma.
I love how Rappa is kind to Eri, and is giving her a headstart.
An' I can't wait to see how Kaen, Kars, Scythe, and Izuku, take down Hassaikai.

Loved Izuku’s speech...but adored how you set up Eri...seems she has a helper
Looking forward to more

lol nice chapter dude :D

Only read chapter 1 so far and imma say it. Idea is great, your writing isn't horrible but you just went into straight up exposition. You could of done an actual scene where izuku saves the 2 girls, instead of saying he saved them. And you shouldn't reveal powers so readily, you throw off the reader by forcing them to remember so much. It would of been better to show the abilities over a few chapters. slow down your pacing, take some time to actually describe places to give a better idea of the environment and people. You might do it in chapter 2 but, wouldn't izukus first thought be his family after he wakes up seeing as he's 100% suic-selfless. And don't get me started on how poorly you introduced your ocs you should of done it one at a time and gave a chunk of the chapter each to make it easier for the reader to remember each character.