Reviews for The gamer: Kireina
frankiebayer2002 chapter 3 . 16h
Please update soon this is to good that it has to update soon
Magnus9284 chapter 3 . 7/23
Alright, I don't mind the changes to Liza and Chika, but I feel the need to clarify just two little details:

1: Chika is the one who speaks in third person, Liza has trouble expressing herself due to low intelligence in my fanfic (she has high Wisdom, but that is going to be revealed next chapter).

2: Dronya is not exactly an OC, I just took her from the game "Labyrinth of Refrain". You can wiki her if you want, and look at her in action in her own game, just dont expect to see someone kind.
Deathchill chapter 3 . 7/22
I enjoyed this so far and will patiently await more. That said I'm unsure of the amount of power you gave zarida and charla. Megumi was fine but I think you gave them a bit to much. so for now 8.5/10.
CrimsonSylvan chapter 3 . 7/21
Can't wait to see what you pick for her next class. On another note next time you post and get to the status screen since you'll have her pick a second class by then(technically 4th or 5th depending what you evolve Adventurer into unless that is what the new class your changing to is replacing since she gained the Slaver class) you should just put 'Proficient with all Melee weapons' for her skills in fighter. Shortens the list and provides more room for the skills for the next classes. Gonna be tricky to pull that off with a magic class unless it's element specific cause your gonna have enough magic spells that cover everything most likely.
The Dreadnaut chapter 3 . 7/21
Always up for a good ole Dimensional-hop. Level 500 though, that's going to steamroll.. everything, even most God's are only lvl 800-1100, but anyway carry on my wayward son.
Do Svidonya
WhineyEmperor89 chapter 3 . 7/21
Likening the story and would like for a Taction class which gives passive buffs to allies and yourself for example 10% chance a plan will succeed or allies attacks do 10% more damage
Shadowuser0112 chapter 3 . 7/21
Please combine the weapon proficiencies. Also she could use the level up potions on the slaver class considering she probably won't want to level up the class by enslaving people.
zackman2k12 chapter 3 . 7/21
hahahahah
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LazyTitanDG chapter 2 . 7/9
Not to flame or anything, but you might wanna change the name to Kirei instead of Kireina. While the words mean the same, they are used differently.
Kirei is normal form, while Kireina is an adjective

Kirei - You are beatiful
Kireina - You have beatiful eyes

Kawa no mizu wa kirei desu/ The river water is beautiful.
watashi wa kireina shatsu ga arimasu/ I have a beautiful T-shirt

Hope that made sense

Cheers
Kla Zark chapter 1 . 7/7
The summary is showing too much?
Shadowuser0112 chapter 2 . 7/6
Let's see how long this lasts
Magnus9284 chapter 2 . 7/5
In the unlikely case you decide to add Cleric levels, remember that a Cleric that doesn't choose a god(des) can alwys dedicate herself to a concept or cause of divine inclination. This is what gives grounds to roleplaying a Shaman, which is basically a Grave Cleric, or Nature Cleric.
The Dreadnaut chapter 2 . 7/2
While most T.G. authors have or try to have a "slow burn" on character progression, most of the stories are either never finished or "plot walled", so it's always good to have the occasional gamer that's OP from the start. Hope to see more. DO SVIDONYA
The Dark Wolf Shiro chapter 2 . 7/1
Nice story so far

Friend of the Undead, Hmm? I sense Wiz in the near future, though the Dullahan is an undead adventure well of course
zackman2k12 chapter 1 . 7/1
good thanks.
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