I think Jewel’s parents are overreacting to Linda, they clearly went through a traumatic time I understand but they needed to let Jewel explain that Linda is not like the humans they’ve seen before,

Hope Brandon and his family can get lily back before Nigel kills her

Well, that took a turn down south. Not south to the point you find rednecks and the southern hemisphere, but still.
Good thing you didn't have it be a Harpy eagle. #HarpyLivesMatter #NotAllHarpies

Well I’m glad Jewel can now hug her parents, oh no lily they need to save her from Nigel

I hope Tia and Carlos get lovers too.

The build up to this point was certainly decently paced, for eleven chapters. Been wondering when Blu and Jewel would deduce the possibility of Sebastian and Valentino being Jewel's parents. I also liked how Evelyn and Jewel accept each other for who they truly are. That paragraph specifically stuck with me.

As for a grow, try to picture yourself in the scene. And ask yourself, what would Jewel say in this instance. Or how would Evelyn react, maybe incorporate how she's breathing or eye contact with Jewel. The dialogue is straight to the point and that's awesome. Though adding some more details to build it up never hurts. Other than that, everything's great.

As for the question, I'm a mix between the two. Blu's nerdy side and Jewel's free spirit.

Well Jewel you’ve worked it out at last, how are Valentina and Sebastian going to react

Glad there was a reference to the first arc of the series. I also enjoyed the foil/opposite of Blu and Jewel's roles. In both the movie and these sets of stories, Jewel's the one with the busted wing. Now, its Blu.

As per usual, this was an alright chapter. Its not bad, nor is it anything great/amazing. Its a nice, comfortable quality, if that makes sense. I hope that Jewel's parents actually tell her the truth, which I'm sure you'll probably save it all for a sappy ending. I'd suggest you'd give them more of a reason to keep the truth from Jewel, because it seems they're just being irrational idiots. Which I suppose might be what you're aiming for to an extent.

To answer the question, neither, I'm not a bird. If I were a bird, and was of a similar age to them, then I'd date Bia I guess. Her love of learning is similar to mine, even though I hate caterpillars, and butterflies to a far lesser extent. But I know for sure Nightfly would wanna date Bia, for sure. I'm sure he has a kink for her or something lol

Well I’m sorry that Blu got injured, hope he recovers soon

I'm liking where this story is going. Keep up the great work, as usual. I'm also curious as if there's going to be a Rio 3 being made or not, given that 20th Century Fox (and Blue Sky Studios by extension) is now property of Disney.

I liked the soccer match, (I'll call it that, because Football is an actually good sport, unlike soccer. But rugby/AFL is superior to both) which is surprising because I hate soccer, so good job I guess. Also liked the bit of comedy with Valentina kicking the other team's asses. Also liked the inclusion of Linda, because she always seems to be forgotten in any story that takes place in the Amazon.

To answer the question: I don't. Not exactly the patriotic kind, but I still do love my country... just not the government, which I'm sure you can relate to, as well as most people. Especially people from countries with corrupt governments, which there are plenty of them. So, I'll talk about my country's national holiday: Australia Day, January 26.
Typically, we go to the beach and have a barbeque, either that or we stay home and invite friends and relatives over for a barbeque. I do think Australia Day should be changed to May 8, because it sounds like 'Mate'.

Okay, I did enjoy this chapter. But minor nitpick: Venus Flytraps aren't found anywhere in South America. They are naturally found only in coastal bogs in the Carolinas, and their range is limited by the destruction/drainage of the swamps they're found in, so they're quite limited in range. Although Florida and Washington have introduced populations. As far as I know, South America has no carnivorous plants like the Venus Flytrap.

Apart from that, this chapter was good and I didn't pick up on any errors that are worth mentioning. Okay, now prepare yourself for nerd me to come out and rant on about paradoxes:

To answer the question: I don't know. What happens if an unstoppable force meets an immovable object? Well, the unstoppable force moves the immovable object. If its unstoppable, then nothing can stop it, not even an immovable object... I think. Anyways, an explosion can't explode, but if it could it'll still be an explosion.

A better question would be the ship of Theseus paradox, or the paradox of the heap. The ship of thesis is taking a ship, and removing an individual old plank and replacing it with a new one. This continues until each plank is replaced with a new piece. Say you kept each old piece in a shed, and then you reassembled the old pieces into the ship. Now, with two identical ships, you are left with the question: Which is the original ship?

For the paradox of the heap, take a heap of sand. Now, remove a single grain at a time until you get only a single grain. From that, at what point is it no longer a heap? Any arbitrary number that defines a heap, say, 10,000 grains of sand can be defeated by saying: So, 9,999 grains of sand isn't a heap? Why is the addition of a single grain of sand enough to make it a heap, when its so small? This can go on until you come to one of the three following conclusions:
1. A heap of sand is comprised of multiple grains of sand
2. A heap of sand can be comprised of a single grain of sand
3. There is no such thing as a heap of sand

I know, mind blowing... sort of. But most of all is the Fletcher's Arrow paradox: Motion can only occur if something changes their position. Take an arrow in motion, and in any one instant in time, there are only two places it can go:
-To where it is
-To where it is not
This is where it becomes confusing: It cannot go to where it is, because its already there. It also can't go to where its not because it cannot move in one instant due to no time elapsing. Logically, if no motion can occur in one instant, then motion can't occur in any instant, meaning motion is impossible.

Sorry for all that, I got carried away. Oh well.

Okay, I don't like how Sebastian and Valentina hide the fact their Jewel's parents. Why? It makes no sense, and I know it'll lead to conflict when Jewel finds out! WHY! No sane parent would do that! Its kind of frustrating how they waste other's and their own time by searching for her, even though they know where she is! Its almost as dumb as Rose stopping Finn from sacrificing himself and sparing other people's lives from Kylo Ren and stuff. Rose died to prevent Finn from sacrificing himself. Seriously, that's so stupid. She jeopardised countless lives and the resistance in general. Or that clone girl in Jurassic World: Fallen Kingdom, who released all the dinosaurs and screwed with nature and stuff. They could've kept the dinosaurs in their cages, open the doors and releasing the gas, and then close the doors and open up the cages. No ecological unbalance and collapse needed!

To answer the question, I live in the Southern Hemisphere, so its winter currently. But because I live in Queensland, Australia, its hot here, even in winter, though to a lesser degree. So, I drink some nice, cool water or some soft drink. Coca cola is my preferred beverage, as is any cola for that matter, but Mountain Dew is also up there. Frozen Coke is epic, and its so great in the summer, though I generally stay inside with the fan on and aircon on. It can get unbearably hot with temperatures exceeding 30 degrees Celsius, high UV rating and high humidity. So staying inside is the best. Screw the great outdoors in summer, except when its raining, that's when its nice.

My suggestions still stand, but the quality is improving a bit. Its also engaging enough for me to read on. Without repetition, I'll cut myself short until I find something to talk about.
To answer the question, I didn't see it and I don't care about Star Wars, so I won't watch it.

Again, dialogue was well warranted in this chapter. Good utilization of detail, especially with referencing how the Pit of Doom was now used for friendly soccer matches.

Hopefully Blu puts out and wins the next game.