Omg! This story has so much potential! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it!

I didn't think Law was much of a snuggler. Maybe Nami and Sanji are the only ones unchanged by the mansion? I'm not familiar with HentaOni, but I like this story and how anxious it makes me. Good job.

Dude when I saw “inspired by HetaOni” my mind went back like ten years to when I watched that thing! It’s been so long I’m remembering bits and pieces as I read but I’m interested to see if you’ll be sticking close to the original or taking it in a different direction. I’m seeing the parallels in actions between Sanji to Japan and Law to France (I’m pretty sure it was France in the closet?), though since you’ve had Sanji attack the monster I’m not sure how you’ll proceed.

Lots of clothes swapping in the beginning. Not sure if you’re hinting to Law/Usopp or not. Lol it got bored with Sanji and left. And Law is being as difficult as France was. I’m not too familiar with Laws character but the seems odd. That or I am forgetting something from the HetaOni thing (Oh god are Usopp and Law having private time so he sent Sanji away? XD)

Looking forward to more!

Wow exciting start, please continue!