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La verdad muy buena historia pero tengo la duda de si cambiara la clasificacion d se mantendra siempre como T sin mas que decir nos leemos en la proxima actualizacion

Great story so far, I’m interested in what his stats will be when Freya comes and updates it. Update soon.

Fuck yeah
Good story
good writing
Good interactions and dialogue
This story is awesome and hilarious i love if
Though
I wonder when Bell will meet Freya again xD and his Lady
Anyways
TLDR
This story is oretty awesome and i wanana read more
Good job

also you'd think that the hunger curse would have tarnished his soul and made him less appealing to Freya. thats one part that feels forced as an author forced plot thing over making sense.

good start. while a lot has happened I feel like the pacing is pretty slow since we are at 100K words and we haven't even gotten to the canon plot at all. that leaves me wondering how long this fic will actually be and or whether it'll ever actually be completed, or at least reach a satisfying length where Bell has actually at least partially realized his harem goal. the hunger power seems to actually hurt him more than help him tbh... like his rapid growth skill in Canon seems arguably a lot better than what he ended up with here. what happens to him if he's ever stuck in a place where he can't get any magic stones? what happens when the stones he can get no longer nourish him. what happens when someone figures out hes a creature? just seems like way more drawbacks than strengths at the moment. its interesting and all that but im doubtful its any good at this point.. like he got suckered by that night lady vampire chick.

great story i have never seen the concept of a creature bell before very interesting.

Great to see another chapter of this, and a far more enjoyable chapter than the previous one (the last one wasn't bad, it was good, I just felt sorry for Bell and everything he was going through). I've been worried with the way the hunger Bell's been feeling with this transformation it makes him feel almost like a junkie, which is a tough thing to balance in writing, but I'm glad to see it being addressed in the story, so I'm definitely interested to see where you go with it.

Glad to see you wanting to include Hestia in this, I mean, of course you have to! It's Hestia, leaving her out of a Danmachi harem story would be too sad! I'm in full agreement with Bell's Grandfather on this, firstly that he should make Freya his rather than being hers, and secondly that he should take the virgin Goddesses first- or at least Hestia's.

It's a strangely lonely feeling to think of Hestia having a familia that's built up without Bell, but it's logical and it's about the only reasonable thing you can do that doesn't leave her as just managing a potato stand for the whole story.

I did wonder if perhaps you might have Freya allow Bell to convert over to Hestia's familia while he was still in hiding from the rest of the Freya familia, as a way of letting him grow/blossom until she was ready to fully reap him, and perhaps do some kind'a co-Goddess thing. But that might be hard to work with regards to Freya's personality. Although, I'll say that having Bell linked to Hestia means you can do the Apollo arc, where having him linked to Freya... Apollo isn't suicidal! Of course I do get some enjoyment imagining Apollo's army of lv1 and 2 adventurers attacking the Hostess of Fertility... somehow I don't think that would end very happily for them.

Very much enjoyed the dialogue and scenes between Bell and Mikoto, and partially because it makes me wonder what'll happen later if Mikoto still winds up running a pass parade onto Bell to protect her companions the same. We saw how wracked with guilt she was about doing that in canon, a pretty huge factor in why she went to save him and why she later converted temporarily for him, so I imagine it'll absolutely fuck with her if it does happen. Of course, this is a very different power scale for Bell and will probably be even more so by that time, so perhaps it'll be completely different.

The Filvis scenes have been great fun and I'm really liking where you're going with her, Naaza too.

As a point of critique I'll say (while I don't mind) that you're possibly going slightly too fast with Eina. Eina was always very fond of Bell and always seemed like she might have something for him, but she only really started feeling for him and stopping thinking of her as a younger brother quite a few novels in, when she started realising how much he'd grown and when she'd had to face the possibility of losing him. At this point in the story, rather than getting jealous of his attraction to other women, she was happy to support him with Ais. But yeah, I'm not really complaining, it's hardly something that bothers me.

The scene with Chloe was great too, although Bell's Grandfather will surely be offended that he didn't do anything with it! Surely if a beautiful woman crawls into your bed, it's nothing more than an insult to practically shoo her off, I'm sure Bell will be regretting that later. Still, here as with Freya (and we're still not exactly clear if she had sex with Bell that night yet) and the possible addition of Aisha later on, it's a relationship you'd imagine *has* to advance from this point, she's shown she's not going to dally around. So I'll be interested where you go with this, if we're going to start seeing Bell actually begin being sexually active, especially within the Hostess of Fertility, where every one of those women is highly skilled and will be aware of everything that's going on...

Personally I'd think with the setup you're using for this story, Freya would be most fitting for Bell's first time, and if not her then I'm always partial to Ryuu... but of course she's surely a long way off, and everything that needs to be unpacked for her past is still far, far deeper in the dungeon. Chloe would be a funny choice, but that's also fun in its own way, especially if Anya starts taking action herself.

Anyway, enough rambling. As I said before, I'm really enjoying this story, I'm eager for more and I'd love to see where you're going with it!

Hehe amid-san is checking out bell... ;)
Hope you update soon :)

Awesome chapter!

ty for the chapt

If you're going to be writing a lot of Filvis you should really read SO12. It's the only volume to really show what she's thinking and it's really different from the outward face she presents.

I really enjoyed reading this fic so far. I'm looking forward towards the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Cheers!

I actually like that Bell is still aiming for the harem route. In canon his thoughts on that have been overridden with being solely a hero and trying to rise to Ais's level. That and rescuing every female friend he has.

...Maybe it is still there, just subconsciously ingrained.
For real though, the one chance he gets to save his only male friend he has to go save Hestia since they both got kidnapped at the same time by Rakia (At least if I remember the events right. Gotta reread that.)

I like how Eina attributes his womanizing as par for the course with being in the familia of a goddess of love.

Wonder if Bell is gonna have to sneak down to lower floors since Eina forbidden him and he has to help Naaza with her trauma during the day.

Hehe filvis is falling for someone... Hehe..
Hope you update soon :)