this is pretty good, and I'm glad that there's a story not focused around all of the seven. i like it so far.

i think its awesome

Hmm... Melissa's a demigod, then? Huh.

Great job writing, as always. However, there's just something... off? In your writing? I can't put my finger on it though... But you still did an epc job in this one.

Oh yeah, right: Would you like a better title? Current title is, uh, long. Maybe "Demigods at Hogwarts" or somewhere along those lines? You could pick if you want, heh.

May the words forever flow,
Eli 3

I’m really enjoying your story so far and I’m excitedly awaiting the next chapters.
Does K stand for Kronos and Luke is Luke Castellan?

HEY WAIT I GUESSED CORRECTLY?
*Doing weird dances around the room while humming My Little Pony*

This is a cool story, keep up the good work! :D

i think that 1. no Maria should be a private thing
and
2. yeah 1 thousand percent one of them should be able to controls the most , either Will or piper

Hiii am back, glad to see you got a beta-reader!
Yesss, Solangelo is just cute. I love lesbian stuff.

About your questions in the end:
1. Maaybe. But give them a reason for it to be famous in the first place; like why a random woman and a family disappeared. Unless that random woman is actually a someone famous, like maybe Maria was affiliated to a powerful wizard, or she was a powerful wizard herself. Take your pick.

2. I'd like Piper to do it, because I'm preetty sure she did it in one of the books. Or maybe have both Pipes and Will have the ability. I dunno, but I'm leaning on Piper.

Great job with your writing, even though it's your first!

Also yes, about your A/N's: I'm okay with it being long, as long as a) You put all your A/Ns in the end, not at the beginning, and b) Don't put A/Ns in the middle of the story. Just don't.

That's all, have a great day/night! :D

There is no possible way to read too may fanfics. It just isn't possible. I like the chapter!

I think you should include Maria di Angelo’s story, it would be a good way for them to begin revealing their backgrounds.
I agree that Will should be the one to control the mist.

Oh gods, this story is good! Please update quickly, I have no idea how often you update but this story is so good, please update sometime soon. I realise you're waiting about a week, but I'm waiting for the next update, I just want you to know that! I've favourited and followed!
Also, how much Solangelo is there going to be? I love Solangelo but I realise the wizarding world has not yet caught up with the muggle world in terms of acceptance, so if you could find a way to sneak Solangelo in somewhere that would be brilliant!

Oooh, chapter two. Noice.
This entire concept is pretty neat but I still think you're going too fast. Hope you could improve on that.
Cool, update soon :D

I love it! You have a solid foundation and are building up the story quite well. The speed is also quite reasonable and not too fast paced eather. Even the 'formal letter' was well written. Honestly, I have can't find a flaw in this story. I just hope for you to update soon.
- L.R.

for the animagus idea, it would still be coherent don't seem very far stretched to see the demigod have natural talent in transforming into one of their godly parent's sacred animals but i doubt the utility of it more, if it's so they can go around unseen, well Nico's shadow-travel wich should make them able to teleport even inside Hogwarts, Jason's ability to fly without anything and whilst being able to carry someone and Piper's charmspeak wich can convince people they didn't saw them, should be more then enough for that

I think that they should arrive before the quidditch match.
I’m really enjoying what you’ve written so far, thank you