This is a great work! Please update. Want to know the whole story.

Please update!

I know it's been sometime but please update. I really liked your story and you bring the characters to life with your writing. I'm sure a lot of us are eagerly waiting for further updates.

Please update author!
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This is cool. I think it's great that Timmy is making a real connection with Tecna - as a reader, I can definitely feel his worry about her.

I think you need to do more showing, not telling. For example, instead of saying that Timmy's technology helps him bond with Tecna, show a scene where it happens. Have the readers see for themselves. You can write a scene where Timmy enters her room and shows her his devices; at first, she is skittish, but she becomes engaged, which encourages Timmy. This will engage your readers much more, as well as making the impact much more meaningful.

I would also say to be cautious about the tense-changes. Sometimes you switch between past and present tense, and this is a bit disconcerting for the readers to follow. It may sound right in your head, but try reading it out and you'll be surprised. It's a very common mistake and is something I struggle with often.

Other than that, great work! I love your addition of Never Be Alone - I really love that song. I can see how it really helped Tecna feel better.

I liked how Timmy sang to Tecna. I think it is good that Musa gave him the ability to sing well. I think he is off to a good start getting Tecna's trust. I wonder what happens next so please update soon.

This is interesting! I am intrigued to hear more about Tecna's journey through this. I am curious about how you will divert from the canon - since this is an AU not set in Alfea or around the main series' events, you have a lot more freedom. Can't wait to see more!