A very good start and very realistic... for a story routed in fantasy and fiction anyways. I meant the portrayal of characters, their thoughts, and their emotions, particularly Kakashi and the two elders. Although I'm not against Kakashi being bashed and portrayed as a lackey, and I'm even doing so in my own stories, the idea of him actually wanting to be close to Naruto and holding some resentment towards others for Naruto's life, like Jiraiya, actually makes a lot of sense. Contrary to many portrayals, Jiraiya and Kakashi were not shown to be close in canon, even beyond basic professionalism, there seemed to be hints of Kakashi not liking being undermined by Jiraiya.

The elders too, although they are easy cannon fodder to portray as Naruto haters in fanfics, in reality, the did seem to view Naruto as an asset to the village rather than a pariah. I think their views were more along with those invested being overly protective of someone of great influence, like the sole heir to a royal lineage or even the First Child of the Presidency. They didn't seem to outright hate Naruto as much as they just seemed to use him as a symbol to threaten their enemies rather than respecting him as a shinobi, so I thought your portrayal was spot on.

Also like that you didn't overpower the Naruto characters, like Obito being chased off by the Gremory. Hate to break it to people, but there is NO ONE in the Naruto world who can go toe-to-toe with Sirzechs. For one, Sirzechs can summon BLACK HOLES at will, there is literally NO JUTSU that can match that, not even the Otsutsuki's power, not even their dimension hopping power will save them, since a Black Hole would literally devour their dimensional rifts, there won't be any dimension hopping if they get caught in the attack Sirzechs used on Asmodeus. That's not taking into account his ultimate power, the Human Shaped Aura of Destruction, which they said, anything he touches in that form is instantly OBLITERATED, which means Kaguya's All-Killing Ash Bones, Jubi's Bijudama, and any of the Otsutsuki's powers won't even touch him and all he has to do is touch them to disintegrate their bodies on an atomic level, so yeah, fuck with Sirzechs and you're basically screwed. He is a SUPER Devil after all. Also think it made sense the rest of his family would be powerful, his wife after all, along with Serafall literally gave meaning to 'when Hell freezes over', and Venelana is called the 'Brunette Madam of Extinction', so yeah, pretty terrifying bunch, beats the Hell out of 'God of Shinobi' (WTF is that title supposed to even mean?! Especially when FOUR PEOPLE have had the damn thing?!)

Hmm... nice start to the fic, though I wonder if this is the last we'll ever hear from the elemental nation? Cause I really doubt that Akatsuki would give up on the Kyuubi. I must say though that I'm really happy that Kakashi and Sakura aren't bashed. Anyways it's nice to see Naruto finding some happiness in this world but i wonder what your plans are for Issei?

Interesting start. I'm curious to see where this goes. There were a couple things that were sort of not my cup of tea, but that's more taste than anything. For example, Kurama talking about a "Kitsune Clan". I guess what bothers me about that is A) there's no such clan in Naruto that we know of, and B) even if there was, Kurama has no connection to it. What a lot of people forget is Kurama isn't actually a fox, nor does he have a gender. It's a mass of chakra that takes the form of a nine-tailed fox. If it/he were part of any clan, it would be the Otsutsuki since he's made from Kaguya's chakra and was created by Hagoromo. Plus, it's always cringey when he calls Naruto "kit" no matter how you try and frame it.

That little pet peeve aside, the story is good and has potential. Can't wait for more.

I like the premise, I mean sure the whole naruto goes to dxd isn’t new but the whole becoming a Kitsune and kurama practically adopting him isn’t something I have seen often.

I am sure some people will freak out he joined the peerage claiming he became a slave or some nonsense and state they refuse to read it but I like your reasoning. I mean first off naruto at this point has always been desperate to belong and she offered him a place in her family. Plus he can’t return to his home and has absolutely no idea about this world so where would he go and what would he do without someone to rely on. That isn’t even taking into account he had litterally just been betrayed by someone he litterally considered his brother who left him for dead without a seconds hesitation and lost everything he ever considered home or safe. That right there would make the idea of latching onto the first person to offer him hope of a better life. That’s pretty common sense, if I hadn’t known how some treat their peerages I would accept for those reason in his place and he has no reason to see being a servant as a bad thing. I mean ninja are beholden to the Kage and the fire lord or their version depending on the village anyways the idea of working for someone wouldn’t really be that new to him.

I feel like you're looking down on Naruto's Talk-No-Jutsu, three years and Rias's peerage should be fully functional demonic beings.

Also you really should just kill off the " Harem King " ( which is funny if anyone made DxD into a real world he would never have a Harem he's way to much like Pervy Sage well... Worse actually. I could totally see Ise as a date rape drug kind of guy. )

You should make this story your own no need to bring that beta chump Ise into the fold it would just bring the quality of the story down.

( They never should have made a background comedy relief character the MC, they would have had a better and diverse fan base because the world of DxD is awesome, well dark and awesome. )

What I don't understand is if Naruto didn't like the Pervy kids why were they still at the school? In canon the only one I could see keeping them at the school would be Rias, but now that buffer would be gone because of how Rias would know ( or at least assume ) Naruto didn't like them. That just seems like a plothole to me. Because without some sort of supernatural support I see the three boys going to jail or at least expelled. And Aika would get a stern talking to.

Also what would be the true need for Ise? You have a MC character already, no need to have two that would just lower the quality of the overall story.

Otherwise the story looks good so far.

Excellent start to your story

Would only dxd girls be in Narutos harem? Or girls from Naruto verse as well?
Would be good for Anko, fu and Yugito, all three would be able to relate with Naruto, due to their own past and being jinchuriki for the last two.
For dxd Kuroka, yasaka, rossweise

I like it

I think rook is not so good he lost his jutsu no? Also he was durable before, he didn’t need be more durable.

I really hope he can perform more complicated jutsus even with the handicap.

I don’t think Issei will get along with Naruto, as he never bot well with Koneko, and tried to change poor Gaspar to a manly man. If he wanted to be trans, what is the problem?

Poor Tsunade I think she really is the one who miss Naruto the most. Kakashi never did enough and he totally could all the time, his Pov were excuses ocer excuses, when you want you can!

I thing Naruto lost in power with the transformation. I hope he can learn to use senheitsu. Also as a kitsune he would have a better life in Kioto.

The good thing is that the elemental nations are safe from the war because without the nine tails, they can’t bring Madara or the juubi.

As you made him younger, he will end up with Rias? After all they live hundred of years two years will mean nothing in 5 years more and there on...

hmm NOPE not gonna read as I really can't stand when authors go full retarded and change Naruto into a fucking 9 tailed fox. Like I said when it comes to that it's just full on RETARDED and you NEVER want to go FULL RETARDED. Well anyways enjoy your furry bullshit i'm outta here ya furry

I can't be sure but is there a major time difference between Naruto's world and DxD's world it's hard to tell and if not does that mean Naruto and Koneko are 15 or 16 high school age in anime is tought to judge.

Also adding (Majima voice from Yakuza) Kiryuu-Chan!, to the peerage are we? hopefully you give her a type of Magic (wind, water or light/binding) that she'll twist for perverted use.

Don't know if any bashing will happen but if it does then just know if Issei get Ddraig taken and given to Naruto...I'm completly fine with that, Honestly the fact he took 8 pawn's alone is kinda a problem to me, but the Author had his reason's, if you do it different then please try to add some character's maybe the whole pervert pact, like the other two have sacred gear's but there low in power but versatile in use like a traping and surveillance or something.

Also are there going to be more the just Akeno and Rias paired to Naruto or is it just them.

Anyway looking forwerd to an update soon!

This is an interesting story.
I have no problem with couples.
Keep it up and Greetings.

Muy buen capitulo no puedo esperar para el siguiente

Wow this is a really good story :D I love how koneko now has someone similar to herself, along with being a fellow mascots of the school. I can't wait for the next update :D

I did have a few questions regarding the story such: Has Naruto not changed from his 12 year old form? (probably with being a devil) Will we see any cute interaction between Naruto, Koneko, and Gasper?

While I really wish you'd have left either Rias or Akeno for Hyoudo and let Naruto bond with the sweet Asia, I get this sinking feeling that you, like so many other authors, are going to dump her with the Perverted Moron that is Issei.