I hadn’t heard of The Infinite Train until an hour ago haha. But I have to say, I’m intrigued. You’ve written this very well,and I'm curious to find out more. I searched what the cartoon is about and after reading the plot, I feel like you’ve captured the essence quite well. Each chapter is filled with a confusing mix of action scenes that slot well together.

I like that you linked in the mirror trick from chapter 1, as it’s a good way to check if the reader is keeping up with the story.

It was a good tactic to introduce the new character of The Cat in such a way.

I also like that you drip-fed a few more bits of info about the Infinite Train.

Love the first few sentences. A wonderful start to the story.

The opening paragraphs about Olsen discovering the plasma minerals **chef’s kiss**. I love it. The sentences about the burning bush and Prometheus are truly well done.

Another good chapter! definitely enjoyed the action in this one. Good job on this fic so far!

I love the historical parts of this. I also laughed at this line: “ Oh… yes… baby, show me the goods," Drakul mumbled in his sleep.” - i like the humor you blend in!

I’m 100% fandom blind on this, but as soon as I saw Van Helsing I knew EXACTLY what was about to go down :) I enjoyed this! I think your descriptions are top notch, and I can’t wait to read more!

You've written a fantastic scene here packed full of action and I absolutely loved it! I think the story is so interesting and you've got a great handle on the characters!

Such an enjoyable chapter! I really really like Juri, I think you've given her plenty of character and she definitely shines in this chapter.

What a cliffhanger! I'm very excited to see what's coming up in the next chapter! I also like the dynamic between Juri and Drakul!

Here from Reddit: this was a super interesting start to your fic! I really like the character of Juri already and think you set the scene beautifully!